One thing: Tetra is a woman, yet the title says "his".
I don't really think this is doable, since Tetra is Zelda, and we already have Zelda. What ideas do you have as far as making that work, Blaze?
how about the crew appears without tetra, and they are more like mentors to Link and friends with Faron, yet you find them in different parts, they are also good thieves like Link.
not really quest, more like part of the story you will find them in different areas to help you or the other way around.how about the crew appears without tetra, and they are more like mentors to Link and friends with Faron, yet you find them in different parts, they are also good thieves like Link.
Interesting. You mean, something like a side-quest? Something you must get them together?
That would kind of make Nigel useless then, if you think about it.
Because you encounter nigel all over hyrule.
I'm not sure if encountering two different peoples in the same area would be good.
Well.. I think what kills this submission is the pirate aspect about it. The world's kind of supposed to be based around Hyrule. But I think the modified approach with Jack being a clever thief is a good approach. Honestly, he should just be a thief all together from the Gerudo Desert, or something.
Gulliermo could probably have something to do with Lake Hylia rather than a random island in the world.. not so sure about Catherine living on the rich side of Hyrule Town as that contradicts A LOT of the story. If she wasn't a Gerudo it would make sense. Jack should be a Gerudo and Catherine should be a Hylian. I know what you're trying to go for here and I think that would solve that issue there.
Not too sure how I feel about Gulliermo. I'll just leave it to another person to give their thoughts on that, I suppose.
Good idea. ;p The whole gist here is that, there's a bagillion ways someone could go about writing this character. It has to be anything but a pirate though.Well.. I think what kills this submission is the pirate aspect about it. The world's kind of supposed to be based around Hyrule. But I think the modified approach with Jack being a clever thief is a good approach. Honestly, he should just be a thief all together from the Gerudo Desert, or something.
Gulliermo could probably have something to do with Lake Hylia rather than a random island in the world.. not so sure about Catherine living on the rich side of Hyrule Town as that contradicts A LOT of the story. If she wasn't a Gerudo it would make sense. Jack should be a Gerudo and Catherine should be a Hylian. I know what you're trying to go for here and I think that would solve that issue there.
Not too sure how I feel about Gulliermo. I'll just leave it to another person to give their thoughts on that, I suppose.
Or he can be like a wannabe theif that has a few of his men in cavarans or something, Link can meet with him when Jack and his crew caravan breaks down after trying to get away from someone. :-\
She fell in love with Jack when he recruited her from some desert monsters, in the Gerudo Desert. She asked Jack if she could join him on the treasure hunt. He didn't care, as long as she did something and didn't budder him.This part is also a bit iffy.
I want to see you develop this idea further as what you have right now seems like a good start. Jack as the troubled, but good-hearted guy... Guilermo as the guy who see's the good in people, but restrains Jack and takes abuse as a result. And Catherine, the outcast who has no place.
If you talk to any of the guys before you've talked with Jack, they'll tell you anything. If you have talked with him, Jack will hand you the Pirate Hat.
Haha, I honestly can't imagine a Deku Pirate. They're such silly people :p
Anyway, I noticed this submission, I just didn't have the time / anything directly to comment on. There was less than 12 hours between posting Piedra and complaining that nobody responded to him, please be more patient, we've all got real life stuff to deal with. Except maybe Steve. Don't know what he does with his time :p
One thing I can say, though about this:QuoteIf you talk to any of the guys before you've talked with Jack, they'll tell you anything. If you have talked with him, Jack will hand you the Pirate Hat.
They'll tell you anything? I feel like that's a type because what do you mean? Also, what do you mean by the second sentence, under what circumstances do you receive the pirate hat? Also, you realize that with the resolution of our graphics, a skull and crossbones will be impossible to sprite on Link's hat, and honestly probably most of the locations you refer to, at least in any detail.