Hmm looks pretty good, just finish the title screen, maybe make a nice background, color the thing next to the Zelda, and get rid of that squiggle above Phantasma Stories. I don't really like the B,A,L part of the HUD, it doesn't fit with the hearts or magic meter. And finally your Eye Spider? Where's a spider? It looks more like an eye with human-like arms and legs, and the shading on the eye doesn't fit in with MC style. It has potential, so keep it up.