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King Tetiro

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I need shading feedback
« on: March 04, 2010, 11:20:58 am »
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I've been trying to recreate the Kingdom Hearts : CoM style by doing Robin Hood. Now Im not worried about the shape but more about the shading

So could you guys repost the image with any shading errors highlighted in some way and explain why its wrong?

Thanks in advance. And just for the record, Im not making a Kingdom Hearts fangame. I may make a mock-up but nothing else.
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Re: I need shading feedback
« Reply #1 on: March 04, 2010, 12:25:55 pm »
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I'd say that the legs look quite strange: the shading is too dark (too contrastive), and it looks like the light source is not in the same direction as the shirt one.
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Re: I need shading feedback
« Reply #2 on: March 04, 2010, 04:27:23 pm »
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Quote from: sjegtp on March 04, 2010, 12:25:55 pm
I'd say that the legs look quite strange: the shading is too dark (too contrastive), and it looks like the light source is not in the same direction as the shirt one.

I'll reshade the legs. What do you mean its too dark?

EDIT: How about this? (The left one)
« Last Edit: March 04, 2010, 04:39:01 pm by King Tetiro »
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Re: I need shading feedback
« Reply #3 on: March 04, 2010, 06:13:05 pm »
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Wait, are you working on the wolf? (I thought you were working on Robin Hood, not the wolf...)

The wolf is quite good, just looks a bit "flat"... try adding one more colour level in the shirt.
The skin/fur and the shoes are okay.
For the head I'd suggest using brighter colours (for more contrast) so that you can see the face features more clearly.
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Re: I need shading feedback
« Reply #4 on: March 04, 2010, 06:22:51 pm »
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Quote from: sjegtp on March 04, 2010, 06:13:05 pm
Wait, are you working on the wolf? (I thought you were working on Robin Hood, not the wolf...)

The wolf is quite good, just looks a bit "flat"... try adding one more colour level in the shirt.
The skin/fur and the shoes are okay.
For the head I'd suggest using brighter colours (for more contrast) so that you can see the face features more clearly.
Haha which one did you think I was talking about?
I'll add another colour level. And brighter colours for the face.
« Last Edit: March 04, 2010, 06:26:37 pm by King Tetiro »
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Re: I need shading feedback
« Reply #5 on: March 04, 2010, 06:30:47 pm »
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quite better now.
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King Tetiro

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Re: I need shading feedback
« Reply #6 on: March 04, 2010, 06:32:37 pm »
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Quote from: sjegtp on March 04, 2010, 06:30:47 pm
quite better now.
Any other errors?
Also, does the muzzle need to be brighter?
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Re: I need shading feedback
« Reply #7 on: March 04, 2010, 06:49:12 pm »
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Quote from: sjegtp on March 04, 2010, 06:13:05 pm
Wait, are you working on the wolf? (I thought you were working on Robin Hood, not the wolf...)

The wolf is quite good, just looks a bit "flat"... try adding one more colour level in the shirt.
The skin/fur and the shoes are okay.
For the head I'd suggest using brighter colours (for more contrast) so that you can see the face features more clearly.

It seems to me you never really watched a Disney movie. The fox in green tights is Disney's version of robin hood. The guy at the bottom in green tights is Disney's version of Peter Pan.

KT, your robin hood looks really nice. I can't really comment on the shading though because I am not familiar with KH sprites.
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Re: I need shading feedback
« Reply #8 on: March 04, 2010, 06:56:28 pm »
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Quote from: Niek on March 04, 2010, 06:49:12 pm
Quote from: sjegtp on March 04, 2010, 06:13:05 pm
Wait, are you working on the wolf? (I thought you were working on Robin Hood, not the wolf...)

The wolf is quite good, just looks a bit "flat"... try adding one more colour level in the shirt.
The skin/fur and the shoes are okay.
For the head I'd suggest using brighter colours (for more contrast) so that you can see the face features more clearly.

It seems to me you never really watched a Disney movie. The fox in green tights is Disney's version of robin hood. The guy at the bottom in green tights is Disney's version of Peter Pan.

KT, your robin hood looks really nice. I can't really comment on the shading though because I am not familiar with KH sprites.
Im trying to get all the Disney classics. I have 16/51 WOOT!!!

And yeh, your right about the characters.
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Re: I need shading feedback
« Reply #9 on: March 04, 2010, 07:26:24 pm »
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Quote from: Niek on March 04, 2010, 06:49:12 pm
It seems to me you never really watched a Disney movie. The fox in green tights is Disney's version of robin hood. The guy at the bottom in green tights is Disney's version of Peter Pan.
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I watched Robin Hood and Peter Pan more than 10 years ago, I'd never remember who is who.
lol, I'd never guess Robin Hood was a fox.
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