Not bad at all, but am I the only one to think that the eyes on
this version are better than in the latest?
Otherwise great job! I really like the clouds, and I think you shouldn't do any massive editing on them, the cartoony look is great right now. I still think you could work on the "Wind Waker" text, try making it rounder. Finally the huge "ZELDA" text should have a white inline, as the original had. That shouldn't add any colours, since you already use white. At last but not least, notice how the original "ZELDA" text gets darker as you go to the left, try replicating that effect.
Keep up the good job!
Oh and it's "The Wind Waker", not "Wind Waker", but meh, that is really neatpicking