Okay I'm back. Good thing I choose lemonade instead of water or alcohol or I would have been seriously poisoned now
. The comments are really awesome and hilarious. Although I think you forgot to snap your fingers a couple of times.
By analyzing the story I have come to the conclusion that at least one of the following is true.
1) The writer really hates goths.
2) The writer really hates Harry Potter.
3) The writer has absolutely no sense about the basics of fiction. AND that is not to make every damn character the same in ideas and personallity. Oh yeah and to keep your events in the story straight.