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Resources => Graphics => Topic started by: Bludleef on September 28, 2007, 05:55:42 am
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I am making this sprite for my game Legend of Zelda: Sage Knight and I just wanted some opinions.
(http://www.phanxgames.com/forum/uploads/20070929_224246_Zelda1.png)
C & C Please!
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i think she looks really good except the way shes drawn her neck and chin kinda blend wierd, makes her chin look enourmous but if you change just a couple of pixels it fixes that
(http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/2823/zeldacustmodhi3.png)
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Ok I made another Saria
(http://www.phanxgames.com/forum/uploads/20070929_224406_Saria.png)
What do you think?
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I like Saria. A lot.
Not too sure about Zelda.
But in Saria's walking down animation her hair changes sides on the last frame. :p
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I like Saria. A lot.
Not too sure about Zelda.
But in Saria's walking down animation her hair changes sides on the last frame. :p
Oh yeah I can fix that easy thanks for pointing it out.
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Another one.
Mido
(http://www.phanxgames.com/forum/uploads/20071001_012519_Mido.png)
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i like your style man, its a shame that its gonna be an rpg rather than an adventure
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i like your style man, its a shame that its gonna be an rpg rather than an adventure
Thanks, but just try it. It still has a Zelda feel to the storyline and some of the gameplay.
Here is the start of a Goron I am doing.
(http://www.phanxgames.com/forum/uploads/20071001_221257_GoronWIP.png)
C and C please
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Wow dude, liked the goron (plus other sprites but the goron stood out to me.)
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(http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/4778/failbv6.png)
If you edit sprites your supposed to specify that you did, unless of course you're trying to play it off like you made them fully custom.
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Yeah, I could tell they were edited from RPG Maker sprites before Delko said anything.
Regardless, here's a crit for your Goron sprite. Look at this image:
(http://www.zelda-world.com/v3/img/zeldaoot/personnages/goron_7.jpg)
Just take a look at it. Then look at your sprite. Yours looks like a Goron doll, or a Goron lego. Give it some personality, make it stand out from your other sprites. It's legs and arms aren't anything like big, unbending cylinders. Try to convey that through your sprite.
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10/10 i really like them!
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(http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/4778/failbv6.png)
If you edit sprites your supposed to specify that you did, unless of course you're trying to play it off like you made them fully custom.
I made them from templates like these.
(http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/1126/kidtemplate7wu.png)
All and all I still made them all the same. The only parts that aren't mine are the heads and hair(Except for Zelda's crown and Mido's Hat). SO I guess you can say I made the clothes. :P
I made them from the RPG Maker Templates because they are being used with RPG Maker Tilesets.
Yeah, I could tell they were edited from RPG Maker sprites before Delko said anything.
Regardless, here's a crit for your Goron sprite. Look at this image:
(http://www.zelda-world.com/v3/img/zeldaoot/personnages/goron_7.jpg)
Just take a look at it. Then look at your sprite. Yours looks like a Goron doll, or a Goron lego. Give it some personality, make it stand out from your other sprites. It's legs and arms aren't anything like big, unbending cylinders. Try to convey that through your sprite.
Yeah that is what bothered me about it thanks for the picture of a goron standing. I only could ever find one of them sitting. That will help alot!
Thanks.
10/10 i really like them!