Well, color sheme: It looks OK but the colours are odd, the blue looks death to me and the green looks really bright.
I like the dude design, but you should try to concentrate more in an artistic feeling, since what you show is what people expect from you to do. You should also change the resolution of the website.
Apart from that good luck I liked some of the examples you have.
But really don't expect good critics from zfgc, they always tell you either it sucks or you are god..
