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Iso character outline part 1
« on: February 23, 2007, 09:23:30 pm »
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Make it good, make it "the Kame way".  :P
Well I actually make the basic outline for an iso character and I post it here to get comments on how to improve it.
Then I'll post it with the colors and then shading etc...
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« Reply #1 on: February 23, 2007, 10:01:13 pm »
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Very nice. You should make a female base too you sexist >:U
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« Reply #2 on: February 23, 2007, 10:07:00 pm »
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Hmm... first of all, he looks too fat.

Second, his left leg is a bit... odd. I can see that it's meant to be facing out, but because of the way you've outlined it, it looks like it's been twisted around. Also the upper part of his left leg is much too fat in comparison to the other leg, perspective or not.

Make him less fat, maybe give him a waist.
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Re: Iso character outline part 1
« Reply #3 on: February 23, 2007, 10:23:34 pm »
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Quote from: Moldrill on February 23, 2007, 10:01:13 pm
Very nice. You should make a female base too you sexist >:U
Thanks although it's got many errors to correct still. ^^ I'm going to make the female (yay) when I get the male well done.
Quote from: mit on February 23, 2007, 10:07:00 pm
Hmm... first of all, he looks too fat.

Second, his left leg is a bit... odd. I can see that it's meant to be facing out, but because of the way you've outlined it, it looks like it's been twisted around. Also the upper part of his left leg is much too fat in comparison to the other leg, perspective or not.

Make him less fat, maybe give him a waist.
Yes i agree it's maybe because at the beginning it was 2 times smaller and I stretcher and fixed it up. I'll show you the original:


Thanks for comments, i'll get to work right away.
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Re: Iso character outline part 1
« Reply #4 on: February 23, 2007, 10:46:44 pm »
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UPDATE pretty quick actually, changed some points, I think the feet look a tad better.

C+C please.
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« Reply #5 on: February 23, 2007, 11:26:23 pm »
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You made the legs worse :(
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Quote from: Moldrill on February 23, 2007, 11:26:23 pm
You made the legs worse :(
Hmm got tired of the unrealistic pose. After all, no one stands like that unless he's got problems. o.0

How about this one?
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