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Hoffy

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My morning's work.
« on: February 24, 2007, 11:49:04 pm »
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I know the shield is retarded, the collar could have been done better and it's not super-duper anyway... oh and the hair is pretty crap too. Oh, and he's missing a scabbard! But otherwise I'm pretty proud of it :). What do you think?
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Re: My morning's work.
« Reply #1 on: February 25, 2007, 12:03:39 am »
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It kind of reminds me of Homsar, lol.  Is it just me or is the hand holding the shield have a thumb out of place?  Besides that and the hands not having the same amount of fingers, it is pretty good, but I cannot draw !@#$%, so whatever.
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Re: My morning's work.
« Reply #2 on: February 25, 2007, 12:32:34 am »
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It's pretty good, but the face needs a lot of work. The way you made the chin and neck makes him look like he's really really fat,and his mouth is way too big. Just the anatomy needs some work, but the detail added is nice! :)
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Re: My morning's work.
« Reply #3 on: February 25, 2007, 07:23:47 am »
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Not your best work. You clearly woke up on the wrong side of the bed. Your other work is 100x better.
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Bludleef

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Re: My morning's work.
« Reply #4 on: February 25, 2007, 08:19:22 am »
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Okay here it goes:

The Bludleef Review

Negative- :'(
Well as most have said the arms are way to long or the legs are way too short (take your pick), his right hand seems to be on backwards while his left hand seems to be missing a finger, and his face is so pudgey it looks like he drank a bit too much Lon Lon Milk.  The detail is nice, but the previously mentioned stuff takes away from that.

Positive- ;D
That sword kicks some major butt the detail in it is superb and the lines for texture give the perfect effect, the tunic has got to be the most detailed tunic I have ever seen drawn in fanart, and the design of the boots is a good concept that just wasn't initiated properly.

Suggested Solution-  ;)
Take an art class on human and animal anatomy and learn how to break the body down into shapes. Or read a book on it whichever.

Overall Score -  :)
7/10 - Defenite talent that just needs very little guidance in anatomy.
« Last Edit: February 25, 2007, 08:27:18 am by Bludleef »
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Re: My morning's work.
« Reply #5 on: February 25, 2007, 11:48:19 am »
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The hands are too long and the legs are too short. Plus, the thumb is on the wrong side of the hand. I haven't seen your art before, but I know that you can do better work.
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Re: My morning's work.
« Reply #6 on: February 25, 2007, 12:21:18 pm »
I'll give you a tip right here.
Try doing some general "bodies". To study anatomy and poses. Just a simple body. Not an existing character. Your representation of Link is fairly good, but your representation of a human is just destroyed by the pose, anatomy, face, etc. Don't lose quality at the cost of details.
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Re: My morning's work.
« Reply #7 on: February 25, 2007, 07:48:15 pm »
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Don't take this the wrong way, but he kind of looks like he has down syndrome...
Still, it rocks. Better than anything I could do.
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