Uh... while I like the beat and I respect you for having the guts necessary to actually take on a project like this, get on a mic and rap, if asked to be bluntly honest, I'd have to say that the lyrics were horribly lacking.
Finding two words that rhyme, slapped at the end of two sentences with the same number of syllables, then stringing each of these two-sentence globs together does not a rap song make.
A+ for effort, but D for quality.