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Re: WIP Zelda Pixel Art
« Reply #40 on: November 23, 2006, 05:23:29 pm »
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What are those lines for at the very bottom, they make it look like she is doing something wierd with her eyes. oops I mean arms.
« Last Edit: November 23, 2006, 05:28:29 pm by Bboy94 »
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« Reply #41 on: November 23, 2006, 05:27:28 pm »
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Quote from: ZoraFan89 on November 23, 2006, 04:37:38 pm
Hmm, yeah, Faceless, your edit bugs me alot. The eyes are just odd. And for some reason, her jaw now looks...masculine? I dunno, the shape of the face is just not what I was going for. The lips weren't exactly what I wanted either, too big. I dunno...she just really isn't the zelda I invisioned when I started work on this. At any rate, I'll edit this later. >_>

EDIT: Ok, here it is.

The left is obviously faceless', the right is mine. I think the right looks more feminine, and pretty much more like what I had in mind.
Looking even better now, except the shaded hair in the background could use a little bit of extra coloring. Looks bland being only one color.
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Re: WIP Zelda Pixel Art
« Reply #42 on: November 23, 2006, 05:38:38 pm »
Amazing, zorafan.  I agree with you, your fixed version looks more feminine than Faceless's version.  Great job, cant wait to see this in your game :D
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« Reply #43 on: November 23, 2006, 05:52:05 pm »
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Quote from: ZoraFan89 on November 23, 2006, 04:37:38 pm
Hmm, yeah, Faceless, your edit bugs me alot. The eyes are just odd. And for some reason, her jaw now looks...masculine? I dunno, the shape of the face is just not what I was going for. The lips weren't exactly what I wanted either, too big. I dunno...she just really isn't the zelda I invisioned when I started work on this. At any rate, I'll edit this later. >_>

EDIT: Ok, here it is.

The left is obviously faceless', the right is mine. I think the right looks more feminine, and pretty much more like what I had in mind.
I prefer the previous, more stylized one.
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« Reply #44 on: November 23, 2006, 05:54:11 pm »
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Quote from: Kame on November 23, 2006, 05:52:05 pm
Quote from: ZoraFan89 on November 23, 2006, 04:37:38 pm
Hmm, yeah, Faceless, your edit bugs me alot. The eyes are just odd. And for some reason, her jaw now looks...masculine? I dunno, the shape of the face is just not what I was going for. The lips weren't exactly what I wanted either, too big. I dunno...she just really isn't the zelda I invisioned when I started work on this. At any rate, I'll edit this later. >_>

EDIT: Ok, here it is.

The left is obviously faceless', the right is mine. I think the right looks more feminine, and pretty much more like what I had in mind.
I prefer the previous, more stylized one.

Faceless' one? But those eyes scare me. :o
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Re: WIP Zelda Pixel Art
« Reply #45 on: November 23, 2006, 06:02:39 pm »
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Quote from: Faldomar on November 23, 2006, 05:54:11 pm
Quote from: Kame on November 23, 2006, 05:52:05 pm
Quote from: ZoraFan89 on November 23, 2006, 04:37:38 pm
Hmm, yeah, Faceless, your edit bugs me alot. The eyes are just odd. And for some reason, her jaw now looks...masculine? I dunno, the shape of the face is just not what I was going for. The lips weren't exactly what I wanted either, too big. I dunno...she just really isn't the zelda I invisioned when I started work on this. At any rate, I'll edit this later. >_>

EDIT: Ok, here it is.

The left is obviously faceless', the right is mine. I think the right looks more feminine, and pretty much more like what I had in mind.
I prefer the previous, more stylized one.

Faceless' one? But those eyes scare me. :o
No, Zora's previous version/update. Edits don't count since they are unofficial and unannounced.
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Re: WIP Zelda Pixel Art
« Reply #46 on: November 23, 2006, 07:11:36 pm »
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I like Zoras edit of faceless's
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Re: WIP Zelda Pixel Art
« Reply #47 on: November 23, 2006, 10:07:52 pm »
Well my edit was scribbled... I was just trying to get her to look prouder.
I never intended for it to be used, and the eyes were just sketched in, and not detailed. I don't know why everyone's making a big deal about them. It was just a guide...

As for your new edit, she looks better than she did, but you've cut off her left shoulder too suddenly.
Have fun reshading everything... I wouldn't want to.
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Re: WIP Zelda Pixel Art [Added Jewelry finally :...
« Reply #48 on: December 08, 2006, 01:28:29 am »
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BUMP! I've finally added jewelry (oh, but I decided to use my previous version). Also, changed the hair, it was too Princess Daisy-esque...>_>

Anyway, give a buttload of C+C, cause I'm not happy quite yet with the jewelry.
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« Reply #49 on: December 08, 2006, 01:35:20 am »
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thats pretty good, but the face is hm... slightly out of shape
anatomy
its well done though
keep at it
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« Reply #50 on: December 08, 2006, 01:59:33 am »
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Hmmmm Im not sure what it is, but I dont like the tiarra :-\(If I figure it out, I'll edit my post.)And I think you should use little triforces for her earrings,like in OOT.
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« Reply #51 on: December 08, 2006, 02:07:16 am »
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Maybe more of a reflection on the jewelry?
Anyways looks awesome : D
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« Reply #52 on: December 08, 2006, 02:18:23 am »
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bleh, I liked your edit of faceless's, now she looks like she has down syndrome
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« Reply #53 on: December 08, 2006, 02:27:54 am »
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she needs a wider chin, mouth jaw and for her chin not to consist mainly of a 45 degree line
you also need to colour her lips as how the light would hit them, not just a few coloured horizontal lines

her eyes are also back to looking empty and dead \

edit-
found the zelda art I coloured ages ago:
, its pretty rusty but the lineart is solid
it seems with your pixel art, you're aiming for a more realistic style, but at the same time you're trying to accentuate her femininity by giving her a ridiculously small jaw bone, over-shined eyes and a small tiny mouth.. it just isn't coherent, everything's clashing
I'd actually recommend restarting, or heavily editing this, I'd say restarting would be easier because you have a tone of colours and aaing that would need to be cleaned up several times through the process
if you do decide to restart you should keep one consistant style in mind and perhaps a more dynamic pose
« Last Edit: December 08, 2006, 02:40:27 am by .TakaM »
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« Reply #54 on: December 08, 2006, 02:53:05 am »
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Can you just add the new hairstyle to the second most recent one, that would be the best one yet. Everything .Takam said with this newest one if you don't do taht though. The white in her right eye(her left) is pale, and finnaly I agree the Triforce earings should make a reapearance.
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« Reply #55 on: December 08, 2006, 03:40:47 am »
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!@#$% it...I give up. D:
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« Reply #56 on: December 08, 2006, 03:52:18 am »
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 :'( Not yet, I just finished my edit.

I'm no expert, but I decided to take a shot at seeing if I could make the dull expression on her face any better. I widened the mouth and made it a slight bit more of a smile, made the inside part of the eyes a little more open, darkened the shiny part a bit, lowered the fronts of the eyebrows, and messed with the jaw line a little.

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Re: WIP Zelda Pixel Art [update 12/07/06: added ...
« Reply #57 on: December 08, 2006, 04:00:00 am »
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Hmm...she looks kinda mischevious, I kinda like that, its fitting to the personality of this zelda. But whatever, I still give up. >_>
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« Reply #58 on: December 08, 2006, 04:09:00 am »
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Quote from: .TakaM on December 08, 2006, 02:27:54 am


.TaKaM: Did you make that or just color it

Zora: I think the zelda look fine already
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« Reply #59 on: December 08, 2006, 07:03:40 pm »
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Meteos, he just colored it. >_>

Ok, here's one last attempt...changed face shape a little, shaded the left side more, added new neck, added Atrius' eyes and eyebrows. >_>



>_>?

[Edit: Forgot to mention that the neck is still very WIP]
« Last Edit: December 08, 2006, 07:07:20 pm by ZoraFan89 »
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