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Adult Link MC*V2
« on: December 28, 2006, 08:08:38 pm »
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Version 2:


Compare those two pictures, and tell me if the adult one is obvious.
Tell me what you think, and tell me what I can do to improve him a little more.

3-Do List(Need 3 C+C Comments):
1. Too much Shadding
2. ...
3. ...

Aspects for growing older, when spriting an older version of another sprite:
Hair: Colour MAY or MAY NOT get litter when you are an adult.
Eyes: Eyes go darker when adult.
Face: Face narrows when growing older.
Skin: Skin darkens when an adult.
Body:  Body can broaden and become taller.

Love
-Mewgull
« Last Edit: December 28, 2006, 08:58:00 pm by Mewgull »
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Re: Adult Link MC
« Reply #1 on: December 28, 2006, 08:10:00 pm »
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Too much shading body wise. But overal, nice job. B+
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Re: Adult Link MC
« Reply #2 on: December 28, 2006, 08:12:56 pm »
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okay, thats one.  When ther are 3 things on the "3-do" list then I will update.
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Re: Adult Link MC
« Reply #3 on: December 28, 2006, 08:16:25 pm »
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I could suggest you make a walking animaiton, that would be nice.
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Re: Adult Link MC
« Reply #4 on: December 28, 2006, 08:20:53 pm »
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okay!
I will take a while though... so be patient ^_^
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Re: Adult Link MC
« Reply #5 on: December 28, 2006, 08:26:07 pm »
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Make better arms It looks like hes trying to fly  :D Otherwise its good though it looks like you just took the upper body part and separed it from the rest and then filled with darker green...
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Re: Adult Link MC*V2
« Reply #6 on: December 28, 2006, 08:58:22 pm »
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VERSION 2
already XD, lol
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Re: Adult Link MC*V2
« Reply #7 on: December 28, 2006, 08:59:22 pm »
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Yes, I can tell the difference, but... you really gotta straighten his arms out :o.
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Re: Adult Link MC*V2
« Reply #8 on: December 28, 2006, 09:12:06 pm »
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I updated.
but now he looks like he has a problem XD
GRR, I can't get this right! >=[
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Re: Adult Link MC*V2
« Reply #9 on: December 28, 2006, 09:20:33 pm »
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Its alot better but...umm....maybe try making the tunic not so rectangular, more like its smaller in the upper part. You get me? Nice work so far  ;)
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Re: Adult Link MC*V2
« Reply #10 on: December 28, 2006, 09:52:48 pm »
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Way better, now put him on some new tunics (Try the ones from TP)
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Re: Adult Link MC*V2
« Reply #11 on: December 29, 2006, 12:09:24 am »
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The arms looks strange. Make them more diagonaly.
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Re: Adult Link MC*V2
« Reply #12 on: December 29, 2006, 12:13:44 am »
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The arms looks strange. Make them more diagonaly.

listen to..... read what that man has to say!! he has the best mc spriter award!!!

i don't know why, but the ears look funny. i think they may be too high up.  and something about his hat doesn't look right.
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Re: Adult Link MC*V2
« Reply #13 on: December 29, 2006, 02:22:06 am »
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heres what I think the arms should look like. (I made this in five minutes, it sucks.)

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Re: Adult Link MC*V2
« Reply #14 on: December 29, 2006, 02:57:32 am »
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Oh my... The arms look better but the body... need work ^^.

The arms looks strange. Make them more diagonaly.

listen to..... read what that man has to say!! he has the best mc spriter award!!!

i don't know why, but the ears look funny. i think they may be too high up.  and something about his hat doesn't look right.

There is nothing wrong with the ears or the hat, I think they're same as the original. Only the dye of the skin is too dark, put the same as the original, I think it would be better.
« Last Edit: December 29, 2006, 03:00:23 am by MemoreX »
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Re: Adult Link MC*V2
« Reply #15 on: December 29, 2006, 03:59:38 am »
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I don't know but it just doesn't look right. The view or something is off for me. Also it might be a little tall.
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Re: Adult Link MC*V2
« Reply #16 on: December 29, 2006, 09:43:19 pm »
Make his hair darker, and his body wider, he is too tall to be that thin XD.

He is probably Anorexic.
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