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2 Rap songs of mine.
« on: March 13, 2007, 06:04:41 pm »
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SKY IN YOUR MIND:
This honestly is the only rap song I have where I didn't make the whole beat. I helped out a friend who hosts his own site and sells beats. This is one of the free ones.
This song is about my Uncle, who was a coke addict and lost his life.
Here it is:
FOR ESNIPS:
http://www.esnips.com/nsdoc/b6d6935a-e61d-41c0-88a0-a1e81d9a2c59/?action=forceDL

FOR NORMAL DOWNLOAD:
http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/3/13/881857/Sky%20In%20Your%20Mind.mp3
This is my only serious rap song I have. :P
I have a total of 10 rap songs now, but I think this is the best. Let me know what you think.
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Too Far
This song is dedicated to a person who is classified as a "!@#$% talker". He talks !@#$% to absolutely anyone if they don't like him. So, naturally, I challenged him to a fight because of what he'd done to me (long story). He backed out, and I was very angry and ended up making this song in 40 minutes. The beat is apparently a little on the annoying side... apparently. :p
This was a joking song. The person I made it about does not care anymore. He finds it funny.
So here it is:
http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/3/13/881857/Too%20Far.mp3
OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE, AND WHEN I REFER TO HIM AS FAT, HE ACTUALLY ISN'T. ^__^
This is my 3rd or 4th rap. No voice change, these are old raps and will not be re-edited. I know what I have to do to my voice to make it more entertaining.
« Last Edit: March 18, 2007, 03:18:32 am by Drew200 »
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Re: My Third Rap Song, Sky in Your Mind
« Reply #1 on: March 13, 2007, 06:13:24 pm »
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I don't have an esnips account.
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« Reply #2 on: March 13, 2007, 06:13:59 pm »
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You need an account? !@#$%...
Um... where's a good place to upload this song?
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« Reply #3 on: March 13, 2007, 06:15:44 pm »
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make a myspace music account :P
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« Reply #4 on: March 13, 2007, 06:26:45 pm »
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Still doesn't work for me.

Try http://www.fileden.com/
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« Reply #5 on: March 13, 2007, 06:26:49 pm »
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Done.
Sorry about all that.
Please comment now :P
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« Reply #6 on: March 13, 2007, 06:30:03 pm »
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Nice, but all the sentences that you've gotta rush to fit the beat are weird.
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« Reply #7 on: March 13, 2007, 06:33:55 pm »
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Rush? Explain.
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« Reply #8 on: March 13, 2007, 06:37:44 pm »
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You had to squeeze loads of words into one line.
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« Reply #9 on: March 13, 2007, 06:41:45 pm »
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I did that because that's the way I rap, a lot. Half my songs are like that.
But I didn't squeeze them in, it wasn't hard at all, it just comes natural, I guess. That's probably my slowest song 0_o
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« Reply #10 on: March 13, 2007, 06:45:17 pm »
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Yeah, but it's consistency. It's fine if you do that most of the song, with specific sections where you don't, but you kind of just did it at random, and it sounds unnatural.
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« Reply #11 on: March 13, 2007, 06:55:40 pm »
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I understand what you mean now. Keep in mind that was my third song, from December.
I just thought it was my best because it means something.
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« Reply #12 on: March 13, 2007, 07:29:25 pm »
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I thought you said you had ten. Although, it's way better than any songs of mine were when I'd written that many, and I'm still not very good, so.. :P
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« Reply #13 on: March 13, 2007, 10:49:01 pm »
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Not bad actually, you could do with some more charisma.. sounds like you just sat there and read the lyrics off of a sheet or something. Need to try and get into it a bit more, give it a bit more energy :)
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« Reply #14 on: March 13, 2007, 11:45:34 pm »
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Yeah, I've been doing that in my later songs. People at school were telling me the same thing.
Thanks :D
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« Reply #15 on: March 14, 2007, 12:40:41 am »
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DANG! This is the kind of rap we need more of. Rap that means stuff, not "HUSTLIN' *****! We love our **es and spend so much chedda'!"

I love the lyrics. Very Kanye West/Common/Lupe Fiasco like. Which is good. You got a hit right here. Fo' rrl!
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Re: My Third Rap Song, Sky in Your Mind
« Reply #16 on: March 14, 2007, 01:14:57 am »
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Haha thanks, you lifted my spirits. ^__^
I believe rap should at least have some meaning, like when I rap about a "!@#$%", it's because I'm referring to her as that because of what she's done to me, or others.
I'm not your normal ballin' pimp slappin' money makin' Chamillionaire.
Although some of his songs are good.
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« Reply #17 on: March 16, 2007, 12:23:33 pm »
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Yeah you're missing flow...  It was okay though.  :)
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« Reply #18 on: March 16, 2007, 09:08:05 pm »
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Quote from: Drew200 on March 14, 2007, 01:14:57 am
Haha thanks, you lifted my spirits. ^__^
I believe rap should at least have some meaning, like when I rap about a "!@#$%", it's because I'm referring to her as that because of what she's done to me, or others.
I'm not your normal ballin' pimp slappin' money makin' Chamillionaire.
Although some of his songs are good.

Lol really man, don't give up. This is VERY good for your 3rd rap song, yo. Can't wait to hear more!
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Re: My Third Rap Song, Sky in Your Mind
« Reply #19 on: March 16, 2007, 09:21:13 pm »
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Damn drew, thats pretty good. Nice job.
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