Our Story: A Short Film by Jonathan Dantzler

Dantztron 3030 Mammy's Favorite Storyteller!	Our Story: A Short Film by Jonathan Dantzler « on: April 11, 2010, 04:25:22 pm »
b e p i s Reputation: +0/-0 Offline Gender: Posts: 3594	This is a film I've been working on for quite a long time that I recently finished. Essentially, it's about unrequited love and its effects on a relationship between a nameless boy and girl. It premiered yesterday on my university campus and was well-received. I'd appreciate it if you could watch it! http://www.vimeo.com/10803545 Logged
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Mirby Drifter	Re: Our Story: A Short Film by Jonathan Dantzler « Reply #1 on: April 11, 2010, 04:30:28 pm »
To bomb or not to bomb... Reputation: +6/-0 Offline Gender: Posts: 4162	Waiting for it to load. I'll edit this post with my thoughts. Sounds intriguing though. EDIT: Nice sign @ 8:53, PRODUCT PLACEMENT @ 9:26. Send me some of that inevitable free Dr Pepper! Are you even typing anything @ 10:18? I can relate @ 10:32. Crazy looks @ 14:52... Great job! The acting was pretty good, as was the writing and cinematography. To be honest, I actually cried! It was sad at the end. Great work! 5 stars out of 10 points. So good the scoring systems got mixed up! « Last Edit: April 11, 2010, 07:04:11 pm by Mirby » Logged
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Dantztron 3030 Mammy's Favorite Storyteller!	Re: Our Story: A Short Film by Jonathan Dantzler « Reply #2 on: April 11, 2010, 09:30:07 pm »
b e p i s Reputation: +0/-0 Offline Gender: Posts: 3594	Quote from: Mirby on April 11, 2010, 04:30:28 pm Waiting for it to load. I'll edit this post with my thoughts. Sounds intriguing though. EDIT: Nice sign @ 8:53, PRODUCT PLACEMENT @ 9:26. Send me some of that inevitable free Dr Pepper! Are you even typing anything @ 10:18? I can relate @ 10:32. Crazy looks @ 14:52... Great job! The acting was pretty good, as was the writing and cinematography. To be honest, I actually cried! It was sad at the end. Great work! 5 stars out of 10 points. So good the scoring systems got mixed up! @8:53: Yeah! Glad you caught it. Those were actually signs I used for the residents on my floor to remind them of a meeting. I thought keeping it there would be fun. @10:18: That's not me It's my friend Nathan, who I was very happy to have playing the lead role. And no, he's not...I kinda forgot about that. @14:52: That was probably my finest achievement in terms of cinematography to date. There were NO special effects used in the dreamy walking sequence, it's all straight off of the camera. I'm extremely proud of it. Thanks so much for watching it! I've worked extremely hard on this movie for a long time and it's good to know people enjoy it. Logged
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Mirby Drifter	Re: Our Story: A Short Film by Jonathan Dantzler « Reply #3 on: April 11, 2010, 10:02:52 pm »
To bomb or not to bomb... Reputation: +6/-0 Offline Gender: Posts: 4162	Well as far as you know, I'm the only one who enjoyed it... since no one else has posted! Great work though! Logged
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Zaeranos	Re: Our Story: A Short Film by Jonathan Dantzler « Reply #4 on: April 12, 2010, 03:22:17 pm »
Reputation: +9/-0 Offline Gender: Posts: 3725	Sorry Dantz it is nothing against you, but just I don't like love dramas or love comedies or anything where love and/or romance is the focal point of the story. Logged

Dantztron 3030 Mammy's Favorite Storyteller!	Re: Our Story: A Short Film by Jonathan Dantzler « Reply #5 on: April 12, 2010, 03:32:45 pm »
b e p i s Reputation: +0/-0 Offline Gender: Posts: 3594	Quote from: Niek on April 12, 2010, 03:22:17 pm Sorry Dantz it is nothing against you, but just I don't like love dramas or love comedies or anything where love and/or romance is the focal point of the story. No problem man, some people just can't get into certain genres and I respect that. Ironically my friend Daniel, who helped me direct this film, kinda has the same issue: he's a real big horror guy. Logged
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Mirby Drifter	Re: Our Story: A Short Film by Jonathan Dantzler « Reply #6 on: April 12, 2010, 04:18:45 pm »
To bomb or not to bomb... Reputation: +6/-0 Offline Gender: Posts: 4162	Is "No Budget Productions" your production company? Logged
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Dantztron 3030 Mammy's Favorite Storyteller!	Re: Our Story: A Short Film by Jonathan Dantzler « Reply #7 on: April 12, 2010, 06:55:27 pm »
b e p i s Reputation: +0/-0 Offline Gender: Posts: 3594	Quote from: Mirby on April 12, 2010, 04:18:45 pm Is "No Budget Productions" your production company? Technically I suppose, though I wouldn't really call us a "company," more just a bunch of students with a somewhat decent camera. We're divided into various subsets too, "The Broumvirate" being said subset primarily in charge of "Our Story." It consists of myself and my friends Zach and Daniel. Logged
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Mirby Drifter	Re: Our Story: A Short Film by Jonathan Dantzler « Reply #8 on: April 12, 2010, 08:47:02 pm »
To bomb or not to bomb... Reputation: +6/-0 Offline Gender: Posts: 4162	I was just asking because I liked the name; thought it was funny. The animation for it was good too. Logged
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Mamoruanime @Mamoruanime	Re: Our Story: A Short Film by Jonathan Dantzler « Reply #9 on: April 12, 2010, 09:00:22 pm »
^Not actually me. Reputation: +9/-0 Offline Gender: Posts: 9786	Very nice Mr Dantz! I anticipate further works from you cracks whip Logged

Dantztron 3030 Mammy's Favorite Storyteller!	Re: Our Story: A Short Film by Jonathan Dantzler « Reply #10 on: April 13, 2010, 04:18:31 pm »
b e p i s Reputation: +0/-0 Offline Gender: Posts: 3594	Quote from: Mamoruanime on April 12, 2010, 09:00:22 pm Very nice Mr Dantz! I anticipate further works from you cracks whip Thanks dood. We've got some more stuff hopefully coming this fall, and it'll be mostly dramatic work like this. Logged
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Quote from: Niek on April 12, 2010, 03:22:17 pm
Sorry Dantz it is nothing against you, but just I don't like love dramas or love comedies or anything where love and/or romance is the focal point of the story.

No problem man, some people just can't get into certain genres and I respect that. Ironically my friend Daniel, who helped me direct this film, kinda has the same issue: he's a real big horror guy.

Yeah, I can't really say what genre I like, but my friends have put it down to 4 basic rules:

1) It needs to contain a hot woman, preferably scarcely dressed, preferably more than one.
2) It needs to contain a martial arts battle, preferably more than one.
3) It needs to contain an explosion, preferably more than one.
4) It needs to contain high tech machinery or an awesome vehicle, preferably more than one.

They say that if it checks out on 3 of those rules, I will like it.

But in all seriousness. Good luck with your next production.

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