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King Tetiro

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Come criticise my new style! Come one come all!
« on: October 24, 2009, 10:58:15 am »
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I've decide to just go for it and try to make a realistic style. Now I know it's nothing right now but I needed feadback on the stationary frame of the down position. The eyes do look better when there's colour btw.

I need feedback!!

EDIT: Uploaded coloured version. I want you all to criticise!!!
EDIT: Uploaded 1 frame of the walking animation. I need someone to fix the legs! They look dreadful!
« Last Edit: October 24, 2009, 01:54:22 pm by King Tetiro »
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Re: Im going for it! Realistic like style!
« Reply #1 on: October 24, 2009, 11:08:35 am »
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How many styles ae you trying to do all at once? Chrono style, realistic. I've seen Megaman pass by.


FEEDBACK: The eyes look weird. They are to high on the head. The middle of the eyes should be halfway the skull.
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King Tetiro

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Re: Im going for it! Realistic like style!
« Reply #2 on: October 24, 2009, 11:10:57 am »
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Quote from: Niek on October 24, 2009, 11:08:35 am
How many styles ae you trying to do all at once? Chrono style, realistic. I've seen Megaman pass by.


FEEDBACK: The eyes look weird. They are to high on the head. The middle of the eyes should be halfway the skull.
Chrono Trigger was the jump between Crystal Blade style and realistic. Lol at the megaman. Really? they seem kinda fine when the face is coloured in. Did you look at the figure in progress on the right?
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« Reply #3 on: October 24, 2009, 11:48:26 am »
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looks a bit too pillow shaded if you ask me. maybe shade it a little different?
And like niek said, the face is a bit oddly proportioned.
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King Tetiro

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« Reply #4 on: October 24, 2009, 12:30:57 pm »
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Quote from: Darklight on October 24, 2009, 11:48:26 am
looks a bit too pillow shaded if you ask me. maybe shade it a little different?
And like niek said, the face is a bit oddly proportioned.
Even if coloured? Hmm...do I move the eyes up 1 pixel or down 1 pixel?
Pillow shading...I thought so. Could some send a realistic shading tutorial my way?

Also, which body parts are pillow shaded?
« Last Edit: October 24, 2009, 12:40:18 pm by King Tetiro »
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« Reply #5 on: October 24, 2009, 12:57:59 pm »
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Move the eyes down AT LEAST one pixel. They look like they're on his forehead. lol
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King Tetiro

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« Reply #6 on: October 24, 2009, 01:02:32 pm »
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HAHA they do! I'll move them down. Also, i really need to know which parts are pillow shaded.
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« Reply #7 on: October 27, 2009, 09:38:51 pm »
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Your shading makes the sprite look real smudgy. :/
Maybe adding using less of those colors would help, and adding more contrast.
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« Reply #8 on: October 28, 2009, 01:06:13 am »
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The jeans are tooooooooo shiny!!!!
...and the eyes are too big
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« Reply #9 on: October 28, 2009, 01:48:10 am »
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Quote from: King Tetiro on October 24, 2009, 10:58:15 am
I've decide to just go for it and try to make a realistic style. Now I know it's nothing right now but I needed feadback on the stationary frame of the down position. The eyes do look better when there's colour btw.

I need feedback!!

EDIT: Uploaded coloured version. I want you all to criticise!!!
EDIT: Uploaded 1 frame of the walking animation. I need someone to fix the legs! They look dreadful!

I have to agree that the legs are far too shiny, and the eyes are huge. Also I'm a bit confused as to why you have that huge palette there; I'm sure you didn't use that many colors :x... I can't check right now due to being at work, but if you did use that many colors, I'd suggest toning it waaaayyy down to like 16 colors MAX for that resolution.

Also I should note that a really good place for crits would be wayofthepixel.net. They've got some nice pointers they can give.
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King Tetiro

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« Reply #10 on: October 29, 2009, 07:15:40 am »
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Wayofthepixel! That was it! Thanks mamor! I'll try and tone down the legs. The eyes have to stay however. I dunno how to do better eyes. I still need someone to teach me how to shade properly.
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