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Twilight Alchemist

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[Revise] The Seven Deadly Thieves
« on: July 28, 2012, 05:27:51 am »
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Name: Envy
HP: 3
Location: The Seven Deadly's Hideout
Description: A tall boy with dark brown hair, he steals all your main quest items (except the sword and thief bracer). Part of a side quest, he is the first one you fight. After you defeat him you get your Bow back.
Attacks:   Slash - 1 Heart Piece
              Envy will slash at Link.

              Bow - 1 Heart Piece
              Envy will shoot arrows at Link.
               Standard Arrows - 1 Heart Piece
               Fire Arrow - 2 Heart Pieces + Link catches flame damaging him 1 Heart Piece per second.
               Ice Arrow - 2 Heart Pieces + Link freezes on contact.
 
Player Combat Countemeasures:
-Sword is the only thing that you can use.
-The Roc's Cape can be used to jump over him.

Name: Wrath
HP: 3
Location: The Seven Deadly's Hideout
Description: A boy with blonde hair who gets angry when someone tries to take is stuff. Wields your Bomb Cannon, he also wields a sword. Part of a side quest, he is the second one you fight. After you defeat him you get your Bomb Cannon back.
Attacks:   Slash - 1 Heart Pieces
              Wrath will slash at Link.

              Dash - 2 Heart Pieces
              Wrath will dash at Link.

             Bomb Cannon - 3 Heart Pieces
               Wrath will launch a bomb at Link

Player Combat Countemeasures: 
-Sword and arrows damage him.
-Ice Arrows will freeze him.
-The Roc's Cape can be used to jump over him.


Name: Gluttony
HP: 3
Location: The Seven Deadly's Hideout
Description: A short fat boy with brown hair who steals only food and will protect it at all costs. Wields your Hookshot. Part of a side quest, he is the third one you fight. After you defeat him you get the Hookshot back
Attacks:   Bite - 2 Heart Pieces
              Gluttony will try to bite Link.

              Hookshot - 1 Heart Piece
               Gluttony will shoot the hookshot at Link, if it hits then Gluttony is pulled to Link, if it misses then Gluttony is pulled to the wall where he will be stunned.

Player Combat Countemeasures:
-Sword is the only thing that will damage him
-Bomb Cannon will stun him.
-Ice Arrows freeze him.
-The Roc's Cape can be used to jump over him.


Name: Pride
HP: 3
Location: The Seven Deadly's Hideout
Description: A short boy with blonde hair. Wields the Shadow Cloak. Part of a side quest, he is the fourth one you fight. After you defeat him you get the Shadow Cloak back
Attacks:    Slash - 1 Heart Piece
                 Pride will slash at Link.

               Pursuit Slash - 2 Heart Pieces
                  Pride uses the Pursuit Slash after using the Slash attack

               Shadow Clone - 1 Heart Piece
                 Pride uses the Shadow Cloak the create a clone, if you attack it you will be stunned

Player Combat Countemeasures:
-Sword is the only thing that will damage him
-Hookshot will stun him.
-Ice Arrows freeze him.
-The Roc's Cape can be used to jump over him.



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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
« Reply #1 on: July 28, 2012, 02:49:16 pm »
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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
« Reply #2 on: July 28, 2012, 03:00:22 pm »
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No issue with referencing the 7 deadly sins, but the appearances and "functions" of each are clearly based on FMA.  Could you rework that a bit?
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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
« Reply #3 on: July 28, 2012, 03:01:34 pm »
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I've noticed that the 7x cliche is too common in videogames.

Referencing the Seven Deadly sins are ok tight butthole, Though I feel they shouldn't be people(If they count as people), I honestly feel that they should be more along the lines of being a demon, I think that would make more sense, but if you dislike this idea you can disreguard this thought.

Edit: I don't think it was defined if you can use an ocarina, and if you can't then you'd be cursed to hell.
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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
« Reply #4 on: July 28, 2012, 03:35:14 pm »
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@Blaze: Yep  :P
@MG-Zero: Yeah, I can rework it.
@Shadow: From the looks of it only 6 out of 7 can be used as enemies.
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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
« Reply #5 on: July 28, 2012, 03:37:05 pm »
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Also I just edited my post just as you posted. :P
Quote from:
I don't think it was defined if you can use an ocarina, and if you can't then you'd be cursed to hell.
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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
« Reply #6 on: July 28, 2012, 03:40:33 pm »
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Also I just edited my post just as you posted. :P
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I don't think it was defined if you can use an ocarina, and if you can't then you'd be cursed to hell.

Oops, forgot about that.

EDIT: Fixed
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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
« Reply #7 on: July 28, 2012, 05:03:08 pm »
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I've noticed that the 7x cliche is too common in videogames.

Referencing the Seven Deadly sins are ok tight butthole, Though I feel they shouldn't be people(If they count as people), I honestly feel that they should be more along the lines of being a demon, I think that would make more sense, but if you dislike this idea you can disreguard this thought.

Edit: I don't think it was defined if you can use an ocarina, and if you can't then you'd be cursed to hell.

Personally, I don't feel like you should make them demons at all. It wouldn't fit with the Zelda universe. Personally, I like the idea of having a gang of thieves that lightly represent the seven sins. However, I agree with MG - this was clearly taken from FMA :P. Why don't you try and figure out a better/more subtle way of integrating the seven sins into 7 *normal* humans?
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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
« Reply #8 on: July 28, 2012, 07:43:36 pm »
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I think a more interesting Envy would be one that stole Link's items temporarily, and used them against him.
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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
« Reply #9 on: July 28, 2012, 08:28:15 pm »
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I think a more interesting Envy would be one that stole Link's items temporarily, and used them against him.

I like that idea!
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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
« Reply #10 on: July 28, 2012, 11:15:56 pm »
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I updated it. Better?  :huh:
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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
« Reply #11 on: July 29, 2012, 12:17:17 am »
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liking the reference XD.
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liking the reference XD.

Thank You! The homunculi were my inspiration for these guys.
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Added Pride.
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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
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I still kinda really dislike the blatant grab from FMA :/
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I still kinda really dislike the blatant grab from FMA :/

How is it still a blatant grab from FMA? I've changed it.
The Seven Deadly Sins existed before FMA. If it is the personality, the homunculi personality is pulled from their 'sin'.
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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
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I still kinda really dislike the blatant grab from FMA :/

How is it still a blatant grab from FMA? I've changed it.
The Seven Deadly Sins existed before FMA. If it is the personality, the homunculi personality is pulled from their 'sin'.

Oh, trust me I know about the seven sins and how they have existed before FMA. I've read into them quite thoroughly and their links to the seven princes of hell mentioned in Paradise Lost. I did indeed notice you changed some of them but Pride is still "a short boy with black hair" with strike attacks that remind me of FMA's Pride.

I would suggest you read more on Pride. Pride is very egocentric, very in your face. It is a very flamboyant sin, aka I don't feel like the character should simply have black hair. I created a version of Pride for my game idea that has long, flowing, extravagant blond hair and an almost permanent smile (I do not suggest stealing my idea, thanks). I just do not feel like your Pride suits the sin description.

Also, so far each of your sins steals only one main item....while Envy can claim most of them? To me, this just sounds unbalanced and quite frankly, OP.
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Yeah, I also imagined Pride as blond.
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I still kinda really dislike the blatant grab from FMA :/

How is it still a blatant grab from FMA? I've changed it.
The Seven Deadly Sins existed before FMA. If it is the personality, the homunculi personality is pulled from their 'sin'.

Oh, trust me I know about the seven sins and how they have existed before FMA. I've read into them quite thoroughly and their links to the seven princes of hell mentioned in Paradise Lost. I did indeed notice you changed some of them but Pride is still "a short boy with black hair" with strike attacks that remind me of FMA's Pride.

I would suggest you read more on Pride. Pride is very egocentric, very in your face. It is a very flamboyant sin, aka I don't feel like the character should simply have black hair. I created a version of Pride for my game idea that has long, flowing, extravagant blond hair and an almost permanent smile (I do not suggest stealing my idea, thanks). I just do not feel like your Pride suits the sin description.

Also, so far each of your sins steals only one main item....while Envy can claim most of them? To me, this just sounds unbalanced and quite frankly, OP.

Oh, I get ya. I can change the hair.
Pride still has slash like attacks mainly so he can use the Pursuit Slash with the Shadow Cloak.
Envy stole all your items and passed them out to the other 5 (You don't fight Lust)
Envy gets the Bow and it's Arrows. He is the first you fight.
Wrath gets the Bomb Cannon. He is the second you fight.
Gluttony gets the Hookshot. He is the third you fight.
Pride gets the Shadow Cloak. He is the fourth you fight.
Greed gets your shield and the Boomerang. He is the fifth you fight.
Sloth gets the Magnetic Gloves. He is the last you fight.
Lust is in a village, using a AoL thing (Come inside). If you follow her in side your health will completely filled, but Lust will steal half your rupees.

When you defeat one of them you get the item they stole, The Bow and Arrows being the most important.
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Re: [Submission] The Seven Deadly Thieves
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I still kinda really dislike the blatant grab from FMA :/

How is it still a blatant grab from FMA? I've changed it.
The Seven Deadly Sins existed before FMA. If it is the personality, the homunculi personality is pulled from their 'sin'.

Oh, trust me I know about the seven sins and how they have existed before FMA. I've read into them quite thoroughly and their links to the seven princes of hell mentioned in Paradise Lost. I did indeed notice you changed some of them but Pride is still "a short boy with black hair" with strike attacks that remind me of FMA's Pride.

I would suggest you read more on Pride. Pride is very egocentric, very in your face. It is a very flamboyant sin, aka I don't feel like the character should simply have black hair. I created a version of Pride for my game idea that has long, flowing, extravagant blond hair and an almost permanent smile (I do not suggest stealing my idea, thanks). I just do not feel like your Pride suits the sin description.

Also, so far each of your sins steals only one main item....while Envy can claim most of them? To me, this just sounds unbalanced and quite frankly, OP.

Oh, I get ya. I can change the hair.
Pride still has slash like attacks mainly so he can use the Pursuit Slash with the Shadow Cloak.
Envy stole all your items and passed them out to the other 5 (You don't fight Lust)
Envy gets the Bow and it's Arrows. He is the first you fight.
Wrath gets the Bomb Cannon. He is the second you fight.
Gluttony gets the Hookshot. He is the third you fight.
Pride gets the Shadow Cloak. He is the fourth you fight.
Greed gets your shield and the Boomerang. He is the fifth you fight.
Sloth gets the Magnetic Gloves. He is the last you fight.
Lust is in a village, using a AoL thing (Come inside). If you follow her in side your health will completely filled, but Lust will steal half your rupees.

When you defeat one of them you get the item they stole, The Bow and Arrows being the most important.

Wouldn't it make more sense if Greed steals half your rupees...
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