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Title: Mr. Wrong - Attorney at STFU
Post by: Alchemist on July 12, 2007, 01:37:10 pm
Hi, my name in ZFGC was originally Weapon, the artist and designer of spells (and certain maps) of Oracle of Life, in work with AoDC. [UNFORTUNATELY I never got around to finishing any sketches I did for the game  :( ]
I had changed my name to Alchemist, as Weapon didn't really "suit" me anymore, and yadda yadda, I'm talking too much.

Anyway, since I had originally planned to enter the character competition but I had no time to do so (due to school assignments...), I whipped up something really quick cuz HoF told me about the odd number of competitors at the moment!

So yeah, here's my character.
Um, you may notice it's almost exactly like "OBJECTION!" scene from Phoenix Wright. Well, that's because it is inspired by that scene, and the man pointing the two fat fingers at you, is based (drawn) off me in real life (yea! even the hat. Check out mug shots if you don't believe me).

I would really include a good story, if it hadn't been for the time constraints and the urgency of my work. Sorry about that, peeps.
But next Character Competition, I can guarantee a really detailed and original character of my own namely "The Alchemist" XD ; but no more from here!
*I'll submit more artwork if people like this*

-Optical mouse, Photoshop 7, Painter IX, 2 hours and good music-
EDIT: Changed the STFU! to SHUT UP. Read it like Bill O'Reilly would say it. PLEASE.
(http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s202/theOrC/EDITSoojectionCharCompNoInk.jpg)


STORY:

The morning sunlight splashed in through the side window into the packed courtroom, spilling onto wooden chattel and its occupants.
"Objection! Your Honor, although hearsay is allowed, this is corpus delicti, he shouldn't be allowed to submit otherwise evidence!" Lees jumped up and shouted, in alarm.
"What? Sure you can, you !@#$%!" Mr. Wrong retorted.
"Mr. Wrong, you cannot submit a-"
"WHAT THE HELL? NO!"
"Wh-?"
"SHUT UP! THIS IS !@#$%!"
"Your Honor, I call this act of deliberate provocation and-"
"SHUT UP."
"ORDER! I demand order in the court! Mr. Wrong, should you-" the Judge was cut off before he could finish.
"SHUT UP!" Mr. Wrong shouted, clearly enraged.
"Arrest him and file for mistrial, officer" the Judge ordered.
"WHAT? NO! YOU SHUT UP AND GET THE HELL AWAY FROM ME! I'LL GOUGE YOU!"
The officer advanced on Mr. Wrong with a baton,
"Calm down Mr. Wrong, just calm down."
But with a movement as quick as a cat, Mr. Wrong leaped across his table and gouged the officer's eyes.  Screaming his trademark sentence, he delivered a swift kick to the officer's nuts, leaving him writhing in pain. Mr. Wrong later went on to win the case by threatening the Judge, and allowing no-one to speak. Not even himself.

Now, hailing from the sandy shores of Bondi where women are plenty and the surfs are large, Mr. Wrong enters the ZFGC competition to spread his infectious personality with only one thing and the only thing that ever stayed in his mind. "Shut up".

Biography:

Name: [Mr.] Yu R. Wrong
Age: 24
Height: 182cm
Weight: 79kg
Buff?: Yes
Straight?: Yes
Married?!: No
Have my babies?: Shut up.
Occupation: Attorney at Law.
Weapon of choice: A gold knuckleduster with S T F U engraved on it.
Hero: Bill O'Reilly
Hates: Bill O'Reilly
What? You can't do that!: You shut your goddamned mouth.
Favourite quote: SHUT UP.
Favourite food: A nice bowl of shut up in the mornings.
Favourite drink: A steaming mug of shut up in the arvos.
Favourite past-time: Telling people to shut up.
Degree: Law degree from Harvard, got through university by partying hard and telling fat professors to SHUT THEIR F**KING CAKEHOLE.
Superpowers?: Yes
Tell us!: Shut up.
O rly?: No seriously. He tells people to shut up and they go away in utter defeat and regret. Yes, even the most badass people.

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Oh, oh, lame, I know, but I had to have something up, sorry :P

EDITTT:: Mr. Wrong's weapon HAD to be added in, for you shall soon see what I have in store.
Title: Re: Character Competition 2007 - My Character..
Post by: 4Sword on July 12, 2007, 02:13:34 pm
If you have Hoffy or NeoGeo-x's permission, this can be moved to the Characters sub-board in the actual  Character Competition 2007 board.  Do you?
Title: Re: Character Competition 2007 - My Character..
Post by: Alchemist on July 12, 2007, 02:15:26 pm
I... I don't know about a permission, HoF's offline, and I don't know about NeoGeo ><

But if you could move it there that'd be nice.
Title: Re: Character Competition 2007 - My Character..
Post by: a Hint of Lime on July 12, 2007, 03:45:08 pm
They updated the topic in the Char. Comp. section, saying you don't need to ask permission first, so I'll just move it for you.  You should probably change the topic title to the character's name tho.

By the way, I like this character :D
Title: Re: Character Competition 2007 - My Character..
Post by: uma on July 12, 2007, 04:01:16 pm
Hmmm... Very interesting. I would love to see an actual story behind this, yo.

Btw, why did you watermark it? I don't think anyone is going to steal/use this without permission...

Title: Re: Character Competition 2007 - My Character..
Post by: NeoGeo-x on July 12, 2007, 04:02:22 pm
Thanks for helping out, Limey.

Anyway, nice character.

Edit: I've renamed this topic to avoid confusion what this character's name is.
Title: Re: Alchemist
Post by: Alchemist on July 13, 2007, 12:06:00 am
Oh, thanks for the positive comments and the topic move.

uma, I'm extremely paranoid about everything I submit to the intarwebz so please forgive me if I'm being a bit paranoid/obnoxious  :o

If it's not too late, I should really give him a proper name and whip up a story =x


EDIT: Nevermind =D
EDIT 2: Thanks Limey
Title: Re: Mr. Wrong - Attorney at STFU
Post by: Halu on July 13, 2007, 12:47:26 am
Mr. Wrong later went on to win the case by threatening the Judge, and allowing no-one to speak. Not even himself.
xD awesome.
Title: Re: Mr. Wrong - Attorney at STFU
Post by: Krynn on July 13, 2007, 12:48:36 am
I lol'd. Im voting for this unless its up against retarded cheese. 8)
Title: Re: Mr. Wrong - Attorney at STFU
Post by: Alchemist on July 13, 2007, 12:50:44 am
oh noez not the dreaded cheese  8)

thank you all  ;)
Title: Re: Mr. Wrong - Attorney at STFU
Post by: Krynn on July 13, 2007, 12:57:11 am
Haha. Yah, I hope jordan is successful (sp?) in winning the competition. =D!
Title: Re: Mr. Wrong - Attorney at STFU
Post by: Alchemist on July 13, 2007, 05:27:26 am
Huge edits and update  :-[
Title: Re: Mr. Wrong - Attorney at STFU
Post by: AoDC on July 13, 2007, 08:48:27 am
Damn, nice. I actually lol'd when I saw the picture XD.
Title: Re: Mr. Wrong - Attorney at STFU
Post by: Krynn on July 14, 2007, 12:09:04 am
Lol, I like the story + the new biography.  XD
Title: Re: Mr. Wrong - Attorney at STFU
Post by: Hoffy on July 14, 2007, 04:11:49 am
Oh geez, you did well, Alchemist. And to think I suggested drawing a circle in paint and submitting it XP. Oh well, this is a good character, as are several of this year's characters.
Title: Re: Mr. Wrong - Attorney at STFU
Post by: Alchemist on July 15, 2007, 02:11:43 am
Haha, thanks HoF, although I could've done a better job of dejagging the pixels more   :-\

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