I think it was because the text was too long. But Goroneater's text was longer than yours and got more popularity. I think that during the match against Cirru, people were surprised with Cirru's beatiful art, but when they entered your topic with a worse art and a longer text they'd have ignored the text and voted Cirru. I regret that I didn't read the text, otherwise I'd have voted Cedris. Hane's text was also gigantic, I wasn't going to read it either (Hoffy describes a lot, really -_-) but everyone was saying that it was a fantastic text, that's why I read.
Anyway, maybe it was the organization of the text. If you compare to Goroneater's, his text had more images, the images called more attention, and his presentation was more organised and clear... But your text was actually very good.