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Hows my lizafos?
« on: February 11, 2010, 05:27:39 am »
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I placed them in my spr show case lol  There also must nearly the height of  my macell. and sokudo sprs


All spr expect goron was made by me.

finally in PNG.  NO MORE JPG MUHAHAHAHA *cough*

my reason for making them:
I am coding them in game, unlike there counter parts from other zelda, these lizafos will be badass with tatical AI, after I code, Ill post vid.   XD
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« Reply #1 on: February 11, 2010, 09:32:39 am »
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Apart from the legs it's not that bad. Nice improvement man. The legs are too diagonal. If you look at other sprites, u will see no diagonal legs. Now go improve all the sprites.
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« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2010, 09:43:24 am »
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Quote from: King Tetiro on February 11, 2010, 09:32:39 am
Apart from the legs it's not that bad. Nice improvement man. The legs are too diagonal. If you look at other sprites, u will see no diagonal legs. Now go improve all the sprites.

Agreed. Also, I like the one to the right of the little yellow guy but I don't really like the one to the left of it. It's something with the head that's bothering me. :huh:

Fix the legs on the one on the right and you've got a nice lizzy! :D

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The legs just need a tad bit of an adjustment inward on the right one. A little spread is a good idea though because it fits the creature well (after all, it isn't a person with straight legs), so you had the right idea for sure, just a bit much. The left one's legs seem worse though.... ?
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Re: Hows my lizafos?
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Ill work on that lol

Sry about the orange hair dude, he is a mix of mc and lttp for now, im making his spr soon, or until i make him in my game.
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Honestly mate and Im saying this to prevent you getting critism raped here. Make all your sprites only 1 style. Either Lttp or MC. Not a mix of both. Besides, do it in Lttp
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Quote from: King Tetiro on February 11, 2010, 04:43:41 pm
Honestly mate and Im saying this to prevent you getting critism raped here. Make all your sprites only 1 style. Either Lttp or MC. Not a mix of both. Besides, do it in Lttp

Unless of course you're using one style or the other as place holders until you convert them in to the correct style? Otherwise, I strongly agree with KT.

Main thing: Don't let yourself get hung up on the graphics; you can always fix things up later.
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Re: Hows my lizafos?
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Quote from: FrozenFire on February 11, 2010, 05:32:27 pm
Quote from: King Tetiro on February 11, 2010, 04:43:41 pm
Honestly mate and Im saying this to prevent you getting critism raped here. Make all your sprites only 1 style. Either Lttp or MC. Not a mix of both. Besides, do it in Lttp

Unless of course you're using one style or the other as place holders until you convert them in to the correct style? Otherwise, I strongly agree with KT.

Main thing: Don't let yourself get hung up on the graphics; you can always fix things up later.

Ill try lol, my reason for always mixing it up with 2 styles is that I want the sprs to look good xD, but ill remake some of them in lttp to see how they turn out.  Macell's body is lttp but his head is far beyond mc xD
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« Reply #7 on: February 11, 2010, 10:05:59 pm »
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Quote from: Linkwolf48 on February 11, 2010, 07:27:10 pm
... my reason for always mixing it up with 2 styles is that I want the sprs to look good xD ...

Ah, then I'm going to side with what KT said:
Quote from: King Tetiro on February 11, 2010, 04:43:41 pm
Make all your sprites only 1 style. ... Not a mix of both. ... do it in Lttp

I'm not going to claim to be a super-experienced spriter, because I'm not, but I do know this much: When you put two styles together (like LttP and MC), the game's graphics contradict rather than compliment. Try to keep the graphics consistent by sticking to a palette and by shading everything using the same shading formula/method.

I can tell that you have got some great creative talent, but I think you just need to make the graphics seem more focused and more put together rather than them seeming so messy and disorganized. Sticking to one style will fix that for you and will also make your game MUCH more appealing to others. ^_^

Also, the whole perspective thing and proportions come into play as well. More reason to stick with one style.
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