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« Reply #21 on: July 03, 2007, 01:55:58 am »
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It sounds like you were, at first, trying to be funny, but then you broke a blood vessel and decided to try to be witty. I'm not trying to be negitive, but, to tell the truth, I don't like your character. He does have a weak story that does sound made up, and that's pretty much compensation for your mediocre blender skills. I could of flamed your character to no end, but I brought out what I thought was weak about him and thought if you fixed it, you might get more votes. Lemme just say one thing; if you're going to win this competition work on the attitude. After all, you're trying to please me, and other fellow ZFGCers. If you can't take our advice, no matter how small or stuck up it sounds, as long as it's real, you gotta try to work on it, or have a good reason not to. If not, that could cost votes.
Okay, first of all Sonic looks NOTHING like a hedge hog. He looks more like a porcupine if you ask me . Secondly, the story is supposed to be made up. Tam Tam isn't going to be the governator or something and try to save the world from bad legislation by filing out piles and pile of papers... he's going to be a hero! A hero who saves the world from not having music. Music is very important after all! The thing is, making a character shoudn't be about pleasing you, or any other people on Zfgc. It should be about fun! You don't like Tam Tam, then don't vote for Tam Tam*coughvoteforTorpidMancough*.
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