No good. For one, the angle is really odd and ridiculous. Second, the colors are vibrant and off-putting, and third, the shading is pillow and the hues are too close in the darker shades.
And, as I've said in another topic, to get proper sprite crits here, post things as you o them. Finish the lineart and post it, get crits for that, fix it up, then color it, post the coloured version, get crits, fix it, then animate, post it, get crits, etc.
