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rhalifax

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My First Sprite *UPDATE*
« on: August 23, 2006, 03:44:03 am »
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Ok so I've been working at this for about an hour, it was a sprite I found in my old computer and I thought i could maybe attempt to resprite him. so comments please! I need to know what to fix!

WIP it isnt finished yet.



UPDATE: I decided to make him more modern so I can use him for my current project. He still has mostly pillow shading, but I worked on his shoes and thined him out abit, I know the stances look weird as well but I'm planning to touch those up alot after I get the final look down.

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Re: My First Sprite
« Reply #1 on: August 23, 2006, 03:59:11 am »
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Dude, thats WAYYYY better then my first sprite, you rock.
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Re: My First Sprite
« Reply #2 on: August 23, 2006, 04:56:57 am »
good work hbrandinewm, you're talented =P
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Re: My First Sprite
« Reply #3 on: August 23, 2006, 10:51:20 am »
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Awesome for your first sprite, but it's little pillowish and you should add more contrast with the shirt and pants. But, if you continue spriting, you'll be a great spriter for sure ;)
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Re: My First Sprite
« Reply #4 on: August 23, 2006, 10:55:44 am »
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Very nice for a first sprite - you got a good pose and some nice shading.

The hand outline looks a little out of place, try a darker brown maybe. More contrast too.
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« Reply #5 on: August 23, 2006, 09:10:27 pm »
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I can't see it :(
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so my friend stole a giant bag of ketchup out of the ketchup pumping things and brought it to our table and we took it in the bathroom and i smashed it over the sink and kicked it around the bathroom and smeared it everywhere and we all took turns kicking the ketchup out of it and when we were done it looked like an african village was murdered in the bathroom
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« Reply #6 on: August 23, 2006, 10:52:43 pm »
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I can't see it :(
i cant see it too :-(...
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Re: My First Sprite
« Reply #7 on: August 23, 2006, 11:40:17 pm »
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« Reply #8 on: August 24, 2006, 12:47:44 am »
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Upload to a different server.
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« Reply #10 on: August 25, 2006, 12:22:10 am »
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Meh, it's ok, lots of crits though.

1. Pillow Shaded - The darker color is on the outside, and gets light towards the middle, giving it a pillowish effect.

2. Jagged Lineart - Anti-Aliasing is your friend bud :)

3. Bit to many colors - Makes it look a bit jumbled.

Those are the most apparent ones, but, nonetheless, good job for your first!
By the way, in no way was I trying to put you down, just giving you crits.
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XFD.
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Re: My First Sprite
« Reply #11 on: August 25, 2006, 07:49:07 pm »
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I changed him a bit, I made him look more modern (he looked like Auron from FFX in a sort of way.)

I haven't reshaded him but I did reoutline his hands in a dark color.

2. Jagged Lineart - Anti-Aliasing is your friend bud :)

3. Bit to many colors - Makes it look a bit jumbled.


Don't understand what you mean in two. and for 3 I made his jacket a dark green and its not so poofy, more like a regular jacket.
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« Reply #12 on: August 25, 2006, 07:53:08 pm »
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Anti-Aliasing is a technique that makes your lineart look not so rugged, go to spriteart.com for a tutorial on it.
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Re: My First Sprite
« Reply #13 on: August 26, 2006, 01:25:06 am »
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Anti-Aliasing is a technique that makes your lineart look not so rugged, go to spriteart.com for a tutorial on it.

ahh I see, I will look into that because I've noticed the ruggedness and its been buggin me.



He still has mostly pillow shading, but I worked on his shoes and thined him out abit, I know the stances look weird as well but I'm planning to touch those up alot after I get the final look down.
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Re: My First Sprite *UPDATE*
« Reply #14 on: August 26, 2006, 01:27:28 am »
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Meh, it's ok, lots of crits though.

1. Pillow Shaded - The darker color is on the outside, and gets light towards the middle, giving it a pillowish effect.

2. Jagged Lineart - Anti-Aliasing is your friend bud :)

3. Bit to many colors - Makes it look a bit jumbled.

Those are the most apparent ones, but, nonetheless, good job for your first!
By the way, in no way was I trying to put you down, just giving you crits.

Once hes in a game you wont notice at all, its an amazing sprite.
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Re: My First Sprite *UPDATE*
« Reply #15 on: August 30, 2006, 09:21:16 pm »
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Meh, it's ok, lots of crits though.

1. Pillow Shaded - The darker color is on the outside, and gets light towards the middle, giving it a pillowish effect.

2. Jagged Lineart - Anti-Aliasing is your friend bud :)

3. Bit to many colors - Makes it look a bit jumbled.

Those are the most apparent ones, but, nonetheless, good job for your first!
By the way, in no way was I trying to put you down, just giving you crits.

Once hes in a game you wont notice at all, its an amazing sprite.
*dies laughing*
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XFD.
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