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Hairy Jellies [WIP]
« on: January 29, 2009, 04:44:32 am »
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These delightful gelatinous fellows are cumulatively one boss in the game.  The hair is obviously unfinished, but I was just wondering how they looked so far overall.  It's Minish Cap style, so I hope they fit, but if anything sticks out be sure to let me know.
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Re: Hairy Jellies [WIP]
« Reply #1 on: January 29, 2009, 05:03:42 am »
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I just find the overall idea of chu jellies having hair to be extremely bizarre. xD I think the colors fit okay with MC, however the hair isn't really MC style but that's probably because it's unfished, as you mentioned. I think the perspective is also a bit off to what the perspective of MC is, unless your jellies from the side are EXTREMELY thin..
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Hm... I should probably put something here...
Re: Hairy Jellies [WIP]
« Reply #2 on: January 29, 2009, 05:46:49 am »
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Perspective is usually my biggest problem, yeah.  If I moved their eyes and mouths downwards on their bodies, would that bring the perspective into the right place, or is it just a lighting issue?
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Re: Hairy Jellies [WIP]
« Reply #3 on: January 29, 2009, 06:23:28 pm »
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The perspective seems alright to me. The issue here is that it looks too edgey due to lack of colors. I guess.
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Re: Hairy Jellies [WIP]
« Reply #4 on: January 30, 2009, 04:41:50 am »
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One thing I would definitely change is the shading on the afro. Your light source is clearly above, as you've demonstrated with the shine of the first two, so your lightest color needs to predominate the afro.
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Re: Hairy Jellies [WIP]
« Reply #5 on: January 30, 2009, 10:07:17 am »
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Yeah, that's what I'm trying to do now, working with the hair to get it super-awesome.  Turns out afros are especially hard to get right.
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