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Some random guy I made... (*Update)
« on: September 01, 2007, 03:32:02 am »
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I made some random guy, cartoonish style. Anyway C+C please.




EDIT: I changed the hair contrast, added a female also.
« Last Edit: September 02, 2007, 02:18:27 pm by Torak »
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Re: Some random guy I made...
« Reply #1 on: September 01, 2007, 03:44:06 am »
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Nice job! A few things though is that it looks just a little bit pillow shaded, and makes the character lok kinda like a doll. Also though, the shirt is kinda odd and looks sorta either like a bandana tied to the neck or mouth.
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« Reply #2 on: September 01, 2007, 03:47:39 am »
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Quote from: TanukiMario on September 01, 2007, 03:44:06 am
Nice job! A few things though is that it looks just a little bit pillow shaded, and makes the character lok kinda like a doll. Also though, the shirt is kinda odd and looks sorta either like a bandana tied to the neck or mouth.
Hmm, never noticed it it does look like a bandana.  :P But I might change it. I did this because I was bored... ( porbably will change it because im still bored...
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« Reply #3 on: September 01, 2007, 01:09:08 pm »
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Hey that's cool, the hair reminds me of Tidus. Good job.
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« Reply #4 on: September 01, 2007, 05:33:06 pm »
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The hair strikes me a tad odd. Other than that and a bit of pillow shading it is not that bad. A suggestion would be to make him a lot taller and change what is right now his shirt, to become just a bandanna. Because he would look squawesome with a bandanna and a shirt.
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« Reply #5 on: September 01, 2007, 09:54:09 pm »
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Nice, I like the style you used. But use a better pallet :P
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« Reply #6 on: September 02, 2007, 06:29:00 am »
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I changed the hair contrast, added a female also.
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Re: Some random guy I made... (*Update)
« Reply #7 on: September 02, 2007, 11:18:17 am »
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I usually don't like sprites but I like these guys! I think it's because of the well done cartoonish style. =P
The hair looks great, the pillow shading there is :-*.
Keep it up!
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Re: Some random guy I made... (*Update)
« Reply #8 on: September 02, 2007, 05:31:57 pm »
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hair needs to have it's darkest shade darker, more contrast.
make the armpit area of the arm 1-2 pixels larger (going down)
take 1-2 pixels off the heel of the shoe.
make his torso 1-2 pixels larger (going down)
this was all on the male, didn't look at the girl.

those are the blatant ones.
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Re: Some random guy I made... (*Update)
« Reply #9 on: September 03, 2007, 05:08:58 am »
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like everyone already said its pretty good but work on the shading
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