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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #20 on: June 18, 2012, 10:43:49 pm »
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Do you want me to edit the original post?
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #21 on: June 18, 2012, 10:45:57 pm »
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #22 on: June 18, 2012, 10:57:15 pm »
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Tomorrow I will be updating it I don't have plenty of time now.
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #23 on: June 25, 2012, 06:15:16 pm »
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Blaze, anything on this?
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #24 on: June 25, 2012, 10:11:36 pm »
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I think I already updated it.
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #25 on: June 25, 2012, 11:22:21 pm »
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Oh, you did, my bad.  Hmm...could you talk about his personality, his relation among the other gang mates and what he provides to the gang and possibly the player (if anything)?
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #26 on: June 26, 2012, 12:05:44 am »
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Sure. Tomorrow I will be updating it.
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #27 on: June 26, 2012, 12:36:08 pm »
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Ok updated the info.
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #28 on: July 17, 2012, 07:55:48 pm »
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So, this is still in revision? Or is already rejected?
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #29 on: July 17, 2012, 08:07:14 pm »
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Seems like a good character now with lots of room for development as the game progresses.  I'm ok with this.
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #30 on: July 17, 2012, 08:14:53 pm »
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Then I should wait to someone else aprove it, right?
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #31 on: July 17, 2012, 08:15:47 pm »
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #32 on: July 17, 2012, 09:04:45 pm »
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Well, I am okay with the dying of the parents now. It doesn't seem like a brutal covered up murder of one of their own. This submission seems solid.

However, it is for a gang member and we have a number more gang member submissions. The already decided gangmembers are (4 in total):
- Link
- Sykes
- Anton
- Juan the thieving Poe

Other submissions are:
- Alex
- Finney
- Malon
- Aveil

I think there is room for 1 or 2 more gangmembers and I think it is best if we'd consider all the remaining submissions before deciding, which one to pick.
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #33 on: November 01, 2012, 04:53:57 pm »
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I think in light of other submissions for the gang, we don't want it to get too big, and this guy doesn't make the cut :/  I'd prefer to accept Finney, maybe Aviel, and Sam and Charlie.

But Niek and Ash, your opinions before I just reject it?
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Re: [Revise] Alex
« Reply #34 on: November 01, 2012, 05:24:17 pm »
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Go for it. We do have a lot of gang members with stronger descriptions.
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Re: [Rejected] Alex
« Reply #35 on: November 01, 2012, 06:46:43 pm »
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I agree as not to make him part of the gang, but he is still an interesting character. Maybe Blaze can rewrite him a bit.
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