*listens to it 3 times*
It's very well done, very interesting, good transitioning, beautiful sounding.
Besides the manly choir thing (just didn't sound quite right some how?) my only problem with it is that there are a few points in the song that tend to favor panning to the right with not much going on in the left, which kind of throws off the balance a tad bit. It could be that my speakers freakin suck though in the fact that they have absolutely NO bass. I could put on my studio head phones but I'm too lazy to dig in to my recording equipment.
Anyway, most of the song is perfect, even on these speakers. Great stuff, I enjoyed it! ^_^