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Custom Link *v2 animated*
« on: November 23, 2006, 07:26:41 pm »
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Yeah, not my best work

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« Last Edit: November 28, 2006, 08:43:46 pm by TomPel »
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Re: Custom Link
« Reply #1 on: November 23, 2006, 07:30:45 pm »
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I like a lot that body :D
Still, his hair and cap aren't very good...
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Re: Custom Link
« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2006, 07:32:24 pm »
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Hmm. The body I very much like. it's well done, and the animation actually looks pretty good. However, the head has problems. The perspectie doesn't match the body, the forehead is too large, Link has almost no hair, and you can hardly see the cap. Other than that it looks pretty good, though. although they eyes seem as though they're a bit too spaced.
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Re: Custom Link V2
« Reply #3 on: November 23, 2006, 07:40:30 pm »
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Ok, update
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Re: Custom Link V2
« Reply #4 on: November 23, 2006, 07:46:12 pm »
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Better, but IMO, you should make his eyes closer to each other, it looks kinda weird right now o_O.
Also, you might wanna make the hair a tad "bigger", so it takes more space on his forehead. Apart from that, great work!
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Re: Custom Link V2
« Reply #5 on: November 23, 2006, 08:29:54 pm »
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Quote from: AleX_XelA on November 23, 2006, 07:46:12 pm
Better, but IMO, you should make his eyes closer to each other, it looks kinda weird right now o_O.
Also, you might wanna make the hair a tad "bigger", so it takes more space on his forehead. Apart from that, great work!
Pretty much what I am thinking. Maybe it's a bit too small. It could cause you a lot of troubles... It's still pretty good.
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Re: Custom Link V2
« Reply #6 on: November 23, 2006, 09:04:39 pm »
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Quote from: Fox on November 23, 2006, 08:29:54 pm
Quote from: AleX_XelA on November 23, 2006, 07:46:12 pm
Better, but IMO, you should make his eyes closer to each other, it looks kinda weird right now o_O.
Also, you might wanna make the hair a tad "bigger", so it takes more space on his forehead. Apart from that, great work!
Pretty much what I am thinking. Maybe it's a bit too small. It could cause you a lot of troubles... It's still pretty good.
Well i wanted to do something small. And as for the eyes, it's part of the style.
I didn't make this for use (though anyone can use it if they want), more like i wanted to do something new and fresh.
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Re: Custom Link V2
« Reply #7 on: November 23, 2006, 09:09:23 pm »
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Its so small I can hardly see how he looks like.
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Re: Custom Link V2
« Reply #8 on: November 23, 2006, 09:12:14 pm »
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Quote from: Hyrule_boy on November 23, 2006, 09:09:23 pm
Its so small I can hardly see how he looks like.
But it's bigger than most gb-sprites :P
Though gb-sprites are more clear
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Re: Custom Link *update!*
« Reply #9 on: November 24, 2006, 03:27:24 pm »
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Re: Custom Link
« Reply #10 on: November 24, 2006, 03:45:32 pm »
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Quote from: Ricky on November 23, 2006, 07:30:45 pm
I like a lot that body :D
Still, his hair and cap aren't very good...

Why do you like he body? What about the body do you like? The color? Shading? The way it's animated?
Why don't his hair and cap look good? What could be changed to improve them?

You SHOULD include this content in your post when replying to an art-based topic!

I think his hair looks too round and the body is too square. Maybe take a few pixels off of the outside edge of his hair and maybe try widening up his body or making it more dynamic by putting a divot in it or something. Also, the cap would look better if it swung in the air when Link walks.
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Re: Custom Link *update!*
« Reply #11 on: November 24, 2006, 06:02:21 pm »
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Use 5 frames for running and speed up the animation. otherwise it looks choppy and crappy.

also, eyes. fix them. he looks like a horse ;D close together prz
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« Reply #12 on: November 24, 2006, 06:26:45 pm »
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Quote from: Gourry Inverse on November 24, 2006, 06:02:21 pm
Use 5 frames for running and speed up the animation. otherwise it looks choppy and crappy.

also, eyes. fix them. he looks like a horse ;D close together prz

I don't think he can make 5 frames, they look like they're being used in RPGMaker. <_<
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Re: Custom Link *update!*
« Reply #13 on: November 24, 2006, 07:29:55 pm »
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Quote from: Faldomar on November 24, 2006, 06:26:45 pm
Quote from: Gourry Inverse on November 24, 2006, 06:02:21 pm
Use 5 frames for running and speed up the animation. otherwise it looks choppy and crappy.

also, eyes. fix them. he looks like a horse ;D close together prz

I don't think he can make 5 frames, they look like they're being used in RPGMaker. <_<
Nah, i was just lazy :P
Maybe i'll add more frames a bit later.
And as for the cap moving, i'll add it asap (first thing in the morning, as it's night in here).
Thanks for the feedback
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Re: Custom Link *update!*
« Reply #14 on: November 27, 2006, 12:53:04 am »
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not much I like about this sprite, although its nice to see a custom sprite for a change.
however I dont really like how the outcome but I know you have potential :P

so, I did an edit:

as you can see, I started with your sprite, grabbed the basic lineart out of it and changed it into one I thought looked better.
I then coloured it (perhaps I should've saved more of these stages) I used the same colours as your sprite at first which I later tweaked and I aa'd and gave some subtle selout.
for extra credit I also did you south run anim cycle, because you did a four frame anim I thought I should show you how to get nicer results for almost the same amount of work.

I suggest examining each frame and then taking another swing at it
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Re: Custom Link *update!*
« Reply #15 on: November 27, 2006, 01:44:16 am »
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Quote from: .TakaM on November 27, 2006, 12:53:04 am
not much I like about this sprite, although its nice to see a custom sprite for a change.
however I dont really like how the outcome but I know you have potential :P

so, I did an edit:

as you can see, I started with your sprite, grabbed the basic lineart out of it and changed it into one I thought looked better.
I then coloured it (perhaps I should've saved more of these stages) I used the same colours as your sprite at first which I later tweaked and I aa'd and gave some subtle selout.
for extra credit I also did you south run anim cycle, because you did a four frame anim I thought I should show you how to get nicer results for almost the same amount of work.

I suggest examining each frame and then taking another swing at it
Nice edit, the AA'ing, animations, and hair look wonderful, however the white strip on his face makes it look as though he is gritting his teeth. I assume that's intended to be his nose or something, but it still gives that impression.

And tom, I like the new views, but the cap on the side view sticks out way too much for it's length. Bring it in a pixel or two.
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Re: Custom Link *update!*
« Reply #16 on: November 27, 2006, 01:55:26 am »
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.Takam has to be the best helper in sprites. He actually demonstrates what should be worked on.

Also, love the edit! Very spiffy.
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Re: Custom Link *update!*
« Reply #17 on: November 27, 2006, 11:50:40 am »
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Thank's .TakaM, i'm not so proud of this piece of work, but i'll just improve it for fun.
Expect an update little later.
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Re: Custom Link *update!*
« Reply #18 on: November 27, 2006, 11:54:27 am »
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the body and head...wayyy different sizes to match. use taka's as an example. its better fitting size-wise.
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Re: Custom Link *update!*
« Reply #19 on: November 27, 2006, 12:58:25 pm »
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Came out maybe too similar to .TakaM's, but what the heck. It's just for practice ;)
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