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WIP Sprite
« on: November 10, 2010, 12:50:30 am »
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Looking for constructive criticism and suggestions and stuffs...


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Re: WIP Sprite
« Reply #1 on: November 10, 2010, 12:55:38 am »
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Looks nice. It has an interesting style and is quite detailed for a sprite.  Is this for a game or for fun/practice?
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Re: WIP Sprite
« Reply #2 on: November 10, 2010, 12:56:40 am »
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That band on his body makes it look like his shoulders are slanted, and the right arm looks shorter than the left... The mask's nose also looks a bit long :/ His feet are also non-existant
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Re: WIP Sprite
« Reply #3 on: November 10, 2010, 01:06:33 am »
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I was going to try to make animations and stuff but didn't want to start unless this met with approval.

Okay, so, should I make the band more horizontal?  And, if you mean the arm on the right, his left arm, than I'm fixing that now along with the mask.  Not having feet was a stylistic choice...  Does it look that bad?
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Re: WIP Sprite
« Reply #4 on: November 10, 2010, 01:08:03 am »
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Maybe define the line between his arm and body a bit more, and move the shoulder's shadow a bit up.

The feet being a stylistic choice is fine, I just thought you forgot them :P
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Re: WIP Sprite
« Reply #5 on: November 10, 2010, 01:26:47 am »
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That better?
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Re: WIP Sprite
« Reply #6 on: November 10, 2010, 04:34:44 am »
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Left arm is still longer (one with green smoke on it) D:
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Re: WIP Sprite
« Reply #7 on: November 10, 2010, 12:46:33 pm »
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because of the perspective you've drawn it from, the left arm needs to be shorter than the right since it's further away.
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Re: WIP Sprite
« Reply #8 on: November 10, 2010, 01:40:54 pm »
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His hand is in his pocket.  I added a shadow to make that clear...

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Re: WIP Sprite
« Reply #9 on: November 10, 2010, 05:56:00 pm »
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Quote from: Mitsu on November 10, 2010, 01:40:54 pm
His hand is in his pocket.  I added a shadow to make that clear...



OH! lol I didn't notice that. The curves on the mask can use some work... It's a bit jagged.

Are you planning on AAing?
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Re: WIP Sprite
« Reply #10 on: November 10, 2010, 06:37:18 pm »
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I don't think I'll do any anti-aliasing.
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Re: WIP Sprite
« Reply #11 on: November 10, 2010, 06:43:49 pm »
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Did you add noise to the jeans? I don't think that looks good :X
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Re: WIP Sprite
« Reply #12 on: November 10, 2010, 06:45:30 pm »
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I think that was an accident.  If you zoom in, all the colours look messed up and pixely.
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Re: WIP Sprite
« Reply #13 on: November 10, 2010, 08:17:19 pm »
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O.o  I don't know how that happened...

Edit: I must've screwed up converting the .png files to .gif (using free version of Graphics Gale which won't save or export as .gif...).


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