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Light/Kira (Deathnote) Line art
« on: October 01, 2007, 10:59:08 pm »
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Light/Kira (Deathnote) Line art in a kind of custom Manga-fusion style (my own style).



I made this at a Comic Grant where I was selling my first Manga "Lee Chan".
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Re: Light/Kira (Deathnote) Line art
« Reply #1 on: October 03, 2007, 01:42:26 pm »
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you need to work on the face (the face proportions) but its ok
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Re: Light/Kira (Deathnote) Line art
« Reply #2 on: October 03, 2007, 06:16:36 pm »
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Quote from: Deku_stick on October 03, 2007, 01:42:26 pm
you need to work on the face (the face proportions) but its ok
Yeah, the only problem this time is the face. Ming ong Helped me with the arms/hands, so it isn't as bad as usual :P
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« Reply #3 on: October 03, 2007, 11:45:45 pm »
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Overally I think it's pretty good.. There's a few minor things here and there, but the main thing though is that it doesn't really look like Light in my opinion... If you didn't say it was Light and you asked "who's this??" I don't think i'd ever be able to guess (unless you wrote "Death Note" on the book he's holding  :P).
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Re: Light/Kira (Deathnote) Line art
« Reply #4 on: October 08, 2007, 03:51:43 pm »
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Quote from: TanukiMario on October 03, 2007, 11:45:45 pm
Overally I think it's pretty good.. There's a few minor things here and there, but the main thing though is that it doesn't really look like Light in my opinion... If you didn't say it was Light and you asked "who's this??" I don't think i'd ever be able to guess (unless you wrote "Death Note" on the book he's holding  :P).
You're right in that, I guess I've to work on the face more the next time ;)
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Re: Light/Kira (Deathnote) Line art
« Reply #5 on: October 09, 2007, 01:58:41 am »
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As mentioned before, the face is in need of an overhaul dude... My main problem is the nose. It looks a bit... crooked. The anatomy of the body is pretty well done, and the hand is pretty well done to, but the face is just... Yipes!  :P

The hair also looks a lil' tiny bit strange... The bangs on the top of the head just come to abrupt end... Maybe get rid of those lines?

Its pretty good though. XD
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Re: Light/Kira (Deathnote) Line art
« Reply #6 on: October 09, 2007, 09:49:23 pm »
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i think the nose is fine, the eyes are what is crooked.  see how the head is turned?
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« Reply #7 on: October 10, 2007, 01:34:54 pm »
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Quote from: Mitsuu on October 09, 2007, 09:49:23 pm
i think the nose is fine, the eyes are what is crooked.  see how the head is turned?
Yeah, I see that the left eye is too much centered, it has to be more in the right side and a bit lower right?
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« Reply #8 on: October 11, 2007, 12:40:35 am »
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well, i mean, the eyes are lined up with each other pretty well, but compared to where the nose is and how the head is tilted, they just need to be moved a little to the right side of his face and then tilt them down to match the head.  and also take into account perspective for his right eye.
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