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Re: [Demo] Twinsen - Story Help
« Reply #60 on: April 07, 2007, 02:07:12 pm »
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Some kind of magical staff should have pushed the planets enegy to the surface when it was stolen by some manic King who wants to destroy Twinsen's world. To do this the King would have to take the staff from where he found it on one side of the world to the Chaos Temple on the other side.
On another note Twinsen sets off to visit his good friend Baldino the inventor to ask him about all the living things that shouldnt be living. Baldino makes a contraption that absorbs the energy dispelled when Twinsen defeats an enemy into Twinsen's body. He also tells Twinsen about the King who has stolen the Magical Staff. Twinsen now worried that his world may end soon sets out to destroy the King and halt his journey before he reaches the Temple of Chaos.

So now Twinsen would have a timer to show where the King is on one side and where the Temple is on the other. You get a game over when the timer runs out. Twinsen has to go around the world to try and beat the King to the Temple. When you do it would show the King walking up to the Temple where you fight him inside.
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Re: [Demo] Twinsen - Story Help
« Reply #61 on: April 07, 2007, 10:11:09 pm »
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I'll build off of yours Taka. Twinsen is out exploring when a massive earthquake shakes the world. The earthquake shakes all of the planet's energy out onto the surface, bringing things to life. But without energy, the planet will die! So Twinsen heads off to Baldino's house to see if there's anything he can do. Then he gets the machine to capture energy. The planet has a certain amount of time before it will die from lack of energy, so you either beat the game before that time runs out, or extend your remaining time by dispelling your collected energy back into the planet at the Shrine of Poiya (name subject to change). Enemies would give you some energy, and bosses would give you a bunch. Sound good?
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Re: [Demo] Twinsen - Story Help
« Reply #62 on: April 08, 2007, 12:20:17 am »
off of takas...
for some reason, Twinsen's planet's magical energy has been pushed to the surface, breathing life into everything (hence the plant enemies etc), after learning this, Twinsen sets off to visit his good friend and inventor Baldino to see if there's something he can do.
Baldino makes a contraption that absorbs the energy dispelled when Twinsen defeats an enemy into Twinsen's body. but Twinsens Brother is very  jealous and wants to obtain power of his own and prove to his brother he's better . so where does Twinsen's brother get power from the forbidden city from a man Eivalen who does forbidden techniques to get what he wants. In return Twinsen's brothers body will serve as a sacrifice for Eivalens Evil plan to destroy Twinsen's planet and rebuild it so he rules with no rebels and starts a planet under his rule. Now whats left for Twinsen to do? stop his brother and show that even though Twinsen is getting power they are still family and to stop Eivalen from manipulating Twinsen's brother so he can succeed in his diabolical plan..

what do you think?
« Last Edit: April 08, 2007, 12:42:00 am by Devy »
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Re: [Demo] Twinsen - Story Help
« Reply #63 on: April 08, 2007, 12:27:02 am »
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I think you should learn to spell. :P Seriously though, your story sounds kinda cliché. And do you really know what seducing means, because.. lol.
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Re: [Demo] Twinsen - Story Help
« Reply #64 on: April 08, 2007, 12:27:42 am »
well sorry i type fast and i dont know its for reference anyways
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Re: [Demo] Twinsen - Story Help
« Reply #65 on: April 08, 2007, 12:35:32 am »
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You could always take time to make sure you've made good spelling and grammar in a post before you hit the post button. Or get Firefox 2x, which automatically spell-checks your posts and underlines incorrect words in red like Microsoft Word. Trust me, people will respect you more if you can type correctly.
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Re: [Demo] Twinsen - Story Help
« Reply #66 on: April 08, 2007, 12:40:05 am »
ok sure ill edit it
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Re: [Demo] Twinsen - Story Help
« Reply #67 on: April 14, 2007, 05:10:31 pm »
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Bleh, you just need some sort of 'master' that could be a final boss, a magical item etc. that once destroyed, releases all the energy.
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Re: [Demo] Twinsen - Story Help
« Reply #68 on: April 14, 2007, 05:27:06 pm »
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what if baldino had already made an energy contraption machine, but this one was so strong that it pushed all the energy to the surface and with that it became living itself. This Super Contraption machine could be the final boss.

the story will be something like this:

For some reason, Twinsen's planet's magical energy has been pushed to the surface, breathing life into everything (hence the plant enemies etc), after learning this, Twinsen sets off to visit his good friend and inventor Baldino to see if there's something he can do. There he finds out that Baldino can help, because he knows what's causing the energy movement: his own far too powerful ECM (Energy Contraption Machine). Then Baldino makes a second version of the ECM, which is less powerful, for Twinsen. With this little tool, Twinsen can gather the magical energy, and defeat the Super ECM. When this Super ECM is destroyed all of the Magical Energy will be released and the planet will be saved.

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Another possible story:
After electrocuting Frunfrock, Frunfrock became a soul, one of the Sendells of the planet Twinsun. But Frunfrock is still active as a Sendell, with his power he pushed all the energy towards the surface and to itself. Because of this Frunfrock became living again and still wants to rule over Twinsun.
After learning that his worlds energy has been moved, Twinsen sets off to visit his good friend and inventor Baldino to see if there's something he can do. Baldino makes a contraption that absorbs the energy dispelled when Twinsen defeats an enemy into Twinsen's body.
« Last Edit: April 15, 2007, 08:55:31 am by Neojume »
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Re: [Demo] Twinsen - Story Help
« Reply #69 on: April 15, 2007, 09:31:35 am »
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Question: What is that giant octopus looking thing on the screenshot on your site?? Will it be in the next demo? Just curious.. :P
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