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<DEFEATED> Chopik
« on: July 05, 2007, 05:05:19 am »
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Story - Chopik is the oddly one-of-a-kind animal who happens to be the hero of this tale. He roamed the forests thick and thamble until one morning Chopik met two Beavers, hard puffing away at building "Fort Beaver". Chopik stopped to say hi. But before he could the Beavers challenged him to a Build-Off. He had no time to decline the challenge either. The rules were simple enough; construct a building bigger than "Fort Beaver" by moonup or be forced to serve the Beaver bros forever! The sun rose up, and then it went down, and one building stood the most towerful. Which one was it? Vote for Chopik to uncover the rest of the story! Will Chopik end up serving a lifetime of Beaver Control!? Lets sure hope not!

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EDIT: New Story!

EDIT: Edited Story!

EDIT: Edited Story!

EDIT: New Chopik!

EDIT: Edited Chopik!

EDIT: Desaturated Chopik!
« Last Edit: August 05, 2007, 06:58:54 am by NeoGeo-x »
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #1 on: July 05, 2007, 05:25:38 am »
  • Silly cat!
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Kawaii!
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #2 on: July 05, 2007, 05:26:19 am »
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Thank you. :) It took me forever to resize the Antlers...
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #3 on: July 05, 2007, 05:29:00 am »
  • Ghosts can have Aliens too you know.
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Oh... oh o h oh! This is going to be tough... you or InvaderLupus! I prefer your character design more because of its extreme simplicity and the swirly bellybutton...

ARGH! I'll just vote when voting comes to time. Until then, I'm promising no one my vote.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #4 on: July 05, 2007, 05:39:04 am »
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Thanks again for positive feedback. I luv you Uma. That banner is just great. I would use it but I need to leave space for when I make Chopik support banners.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #5 on: July 05, 2007, 05:46:39 am »
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Your welcome :3.

Fergie makes my pants feel tight. :3 But you all probably didn't need to know that. :-[ *New personal quote for my FA*

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Re: Chopik
« Reply #6 on: July 05, 2007, 07:26:29 am »
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I dont know what to say Uma... Have fun with that? :-*
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #7 on: July 05, 2007, 01:42:02 pm »
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I'm not sure. I love love love the character design, and I also love the story but the two just don't fit. The first seems great for one of those E-rated Nintendo games that everybody plays because it's lovely, and the story seems like an eerie feudal Japanese folk-tale. And those two things just don't fit. I'm not sure.
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« Reply #8 on: July 05, 2007, 02:41:57 pm »
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Kawaii!
I agree :P
I loved the design, but I didn't like the story very much.

Oh... oh o h oh! This is going to be tough... you or InvaderLupus! I prefer your character design more because of its extreme simplicity and the swirly bellybutton...

ARGH! I'll just vote when voting comes to time. Until then, I'm promising no one my vote.
Stop being humble uma, you know your character rocks too!
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #9 on: July 05, 2007, 04:24:26 pm »
  • I choose you, Zorua!
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Too bad there aren't a lot of girls on ZFGC. If there were, this character would make it to the semi-finals for sure..at least. :P

But since there aren't, we'll just have to wait and see how guys like this. As for myself, permanently in search of my feminine side, think this character looks gorgeous.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #10 on: July 05, 2007, 05:46:55 pm »
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Stop being humble uma, you know your character rocks too!

But I never vote for myself so...
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #11 on: July 05, 2007, 06:05:54 pm »
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I'm not sure. I love love love the character design, and I also love the story but the two just don't fit. The first seems great for one of those E-rated Nintendo games that everybody plays because it's lovely, and the story seems like an eerie feudal Japanese folk-tale. And those two things just don't fit. I'm not sure.

It does sound a little serious for the character doesnt it... May I ask for a story re-write Hoffy? If not may the force be with me.

Neo... :)

Uma I still luv you.
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« Reply #12 on: July 05, 2007, 07:00:20 pm »
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Reminds me to a pokemon :P, The only thing I dislike is the part that we need to vote so he can win the building contest.
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« Reply #13 on: July 05, 2007, 07:10:07 pm »
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Its all I could come up with to make it sound friendly enough. What Pokemon does he remind you to?
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« Reply #14 on: July 05, 2007, 07:18:46 pm »
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Moldrill, you're hilarious. The new story is so ridiculous I can't decide whether I love or hate it. Good luck to you.
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« Reply #15 on: July 05, 2007, 07:22:23 pm »
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mostly the style and the colours looks to much like a pokemon.. mostly these:
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #16 on: July 05, 2007, 07:33:36 pm »
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No, it's much more simplistic and appealing than that freakish creature.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #17 on: July 05, 2007, 07:57:16 pm »
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Haha. I see a resembelance. Just like I do in any giraffe like animal. :P
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« Reply #18 on: July 05, 2007, 08:20:02 pm »
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I like it :D. Just like all your stuff is awesome. But for some reason it reminds me of the Pokemon Giraffarig or whatever the heck it's called.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #19 on: July 05, 2007, 08:32:09 pm »
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Ya know that might be because he is a giraffe-like animal. :P
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