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ZFGC CP => Enemy Units => NPC Design => King of Thieves => Cut Submissions => Topic started by: Zhello on September 24, 2012, 04:16:32 pm

Title: [Rejected] The Nejiron
Post by: Zhello on September 24, 2012, 04:16:32 pm
Name:
Nejiron- Enemies of Gorons
Twisted Gorons
(http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110721220008/villains/images/thumb/b/b0/Nejiron.png/277px-Nejiron.png)


Location:
Mountain paths
Field Roads/Highways
(if areas exists: volcanoes, base of goron cities)


Appearance:
They are simialr to gorons, however, they only mimic them in order to chase/attack any passerby in their teritory.



HP:
Normal: 1 HP



Description
They emerge from the ground to fight off and or roll into those in their terriority.


In-Game Description
They act like gorons, they move like gorons, but there not gorons.



Attack List
rolling- When they emerge from the ground, they will attempt to roll into a player, expolding on contain due to their use of gunpowder. Blowing up will make them go back into the ground to try again.

charge- When standing up right, they will try to headbutt you when close enough, at times a headbutt will cause an explosion, knocking out the monster.

Defending grounds- They emerge to defend a path, blocking the player. In order to prevent blowing themselves up, they will block off the path having their backs tunred to Link.

Upon Death- They simply fall to the ground, and slowly dig back under ground.


Weakness:
Fire, Bombs, Hitting a Wall when rolling(When they are moving and facing you, this will make them blow up.)
Title: Re: [Submission] The Nejiron
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 24, 2012, 05:01:40 pm
There's no need for you to post the artwork here. In fact, the artwork isn't even in MC style.
Title: Re: [Submission] The Nejiron
Post by: Starforsaken101 on September 24, 2012, 05:05:04 pm
There's no need for you to post the artwork here. In fact, the artwork isn't even in MC style.

Whether the style of artwork is in MC style or not, that doesn't really matter (well, it matters, but it's really up to the concept artist. My Redead isn't really in a WW/MC style at all). The underlying problem with these submissions is the use of images simply searched from Google or whatever that you have no ownership of. I find it in extreme distaste to copy somebody else's image for use in design. I hate it, and it's unprofessional. The design itself I'm sure is great, but get the hang of not submitting any images unless they are your own.

Equally, as Blaze mentioned, this is NOT the place to be submitting concept art or sprites. You may however use images to help us visualize what you mean for certain areas of the design that may seem unclear to the reader. However, you really should be trying your best not to link images as they go through their own submission process.

Also, as mentioned earlier Blaze, this technique is known as "rent-a-modding" and is usually frowned upon in this community. I know you mean well, but I strongly advise you leave this to us.
Title: Re: [Submission] The Nejiron
Post by: Zhello on September 24, 2012, 05:13:35 pm
Ah ok  :-\, I normally post images with a submission to show people what the enemy look like from Zelda games, so I just choose an image showing the enemy, but if there is artwork on it, I will sometimes times added if I had permission to.

I thought that just putting the Nejiron name, people will not know/remember what they are lol. For other submission, I post images representing a monster, npc, etc. But before that I look to see if credit is needed or not, like for the gyorog, I had permission since, and decided to use it in a post.
Title: Re: [Submission] The Nejiron
Post by: Starforsaken101 on September 24, 2012, 05:20:13 pm
Ah ok  :-\, I normally post images with a submission to show people what the enemy look like from Zelda games, so I just choose an image showing the enemy, but if there is artwork on it, I will sometimes times added if I had permission to.

I thought that just putting the Nejiron name, people will not know/remember what they are lol. For other submission, I post images representing a monster, npc, etc. But before that I look to see if credit is needed or not, like for the gyorog, I had permission since, and decided to use it in a post.

It doesn't really matter, in all honesty, because chances are the artists are going to completely change the look anyway. As a concept artist here, I try my best to get something unique out based off of the textual representation of the enemy; the images you post are essentially useless.
Title: Re: [Submission] The Nejiron
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 24, 2012, 05:30:44 pm
Sorry, I was just trying to help :(.

Anyway, the function of this isn't somehow replaced with the carbonite?
Title: Re: [Submission] The Nejiron
Post by: Starforsaken101 on October 30, 2012, 06:01:34 pm
Alright, nobody has commented on this. I vote to scrap this design due to the fact that, as Blaze pointed out, Carbonite is already an enemy that is very similar to this. We don't need doubles of enemies. Here is the Carbonite thread: http://zfgc.com/forum/index.php?topic=39745.0 (http://zfgc.com/forum/index.php?topic=39745.0).

Niek, MG, Max?
Title: Re: [Submission] The Nejiron
Post by: Zaeranos on October 30, 2012, 08:38:29 pm
Yeah scrap it. I have thought long about it, but it just does not give me good feeling.
Title: Re: [Rejected] The Nejiron
Post by: Max. on October 31, 2012, 02:24:51 pm
Agreed. :D

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