The pictures look great, with some really nice poses. The makeup however is another story. It is not really that beautiful. To my opinion makeup should bring out someones natural beauty and accentuate the natural colors. What makeup shouldn't do is paint someone as a clown (unless you wanted to be a clown for a party or something).
This girl hasn't been painted as a clown though, but it also fails to bring out her natural beauty. The thing that disturbs me the most is the lipstick. Did he run out of it or something? I know geisha's have their lips painted in the same manner. They also have a complete white mask over the rest of their face and the rest of the lips, which results in letting the corners of the lips disappear. With this girl the rest of the lips don't disappear and from a distance it looks as if she has a rash or something, because the lipstick pops out like canonball from a canon.
Well those are my thoughts, I hope you find them useful.