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Resources => Graphics => Topic started by: . on May 28, 2011, 09:41:52 pm

Title: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: . on May 28, 2011, 09:41:52 pm: I'm not a spriter, but would like to improve my spriting skills, so I decided to make a sprite gallery where I will occasionally post something for critique.

Oshus - Phantom Hourglass (MC Style)
(http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/2733/oshus.png) -> (http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/8104/oshus2.png)
On Oshus, I'm mainly wanting to improve the staff, but please say how to fix anything else you may see. Reference (http://www.zeldadungeon.net/Zelda12/Characters/Oshus_Large.jpg)

Gerudo Guard - Ocarina of Time (MC Style)
(http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/2783/gerudo.png)
Reference (http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110424184638/zelda/images/thumb/3/32/Gerudo_Artwork_%28Ocarina_of_Time%29.png/311px-Gerudo_Artwork_%28Ocarina_of_Time%29.png)
Title: Re: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: Moffett1990 on May 28, 2011, 11:00:37 pm: Pretty good
Title: Re: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: Aero88 on May 28, 2011, 11:18:36 pm: Nice work, but I do have a suggestion. To me it looks like he is holding the very tip of the staff... I am not really a spriter, but I would suggest bringing it down and showing some of it below his hand . As it is now it almost looks like it is behind him.
Title: Re: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: . on May 28, 2011, 11:25:28 pm: Like this?
(http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/8104/oshus2.png)
Title: Re: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: OpenCoconut25 on May 29, 2011, 08:34:55 am: wow, thats really cool!
Title: Re: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: . on May 29, 2011, 04:15:44 pm: Thank you! :)
Title: Re: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: . on May 30, 2011, 03:11:05 am: I added a Gerudo Guard.
(http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/2783/gerudo.png)
Title: Re: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: Eleo on May 30, 2011, 09:57:13 am: The coloring and details on the gerudo guard is awesome, but she is a bit small... Her body seems smaller than MC Links, and he is a child/youth whereas the gerudo guards are grown up. Any way of making her a little taller?
Title: Re: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: . on May 30, 2011, 05:47:53 pm: She's an edit of Din, so the same size as her.

EDIT: Without her hair thing, she's the same height as Link, and with it she's taller.
Title: Re: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: Eleo on June 02, 2011, 10:19:01 am: Oh! I maxed the size up and your right it's the same... Should she perhaps have yellow eyes though?
She looked awesomely done when I maxed up the size :)
Title: Re: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: . on June 02, 2011, 04:42:23 pm: Yellow eyes? The reference doesn't have yellow eyes, and I don't remember Gerudos having yellow eyes.
Title: Re: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: Eleo on June 02, 2011, 06:21:15 pm: (http://www.zeldadungeon.net/Zelda05/Enemies/GerudoGuardG_Large.png)

I thought they had yellow eyes in all versions...
Title: Re: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: . on June 02, 2011, 06:29:48 pm: It looks like different ones have different colors.
Title: Re: jimn346's Gallery
Post by: Eleo on June 02, 2011, 06:33:52 pm: What reference picture did you use? I got kinda curious! ^_^ I'd love it if you did a white clad gerudo with short hair and the classical gerudo warriors as well.