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Snowy church lttp style
« on: October 09, 2007, 01:26:26 pm »
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Hi, on request from Kevin i am making a church that will be used in his icyland of his game, anyway in my opinion it looks a little bit messy so i thought i should post it so i could get some criticism to make it better,

i have 2 version

1 with ice taps:                                                                          2 without ice taps:




Ow BTW, something worth noting is that these ain't for use.

Edit: Latest verision:
« Last Edit: October 20, 2007, 09:11:57 pm by Norlem »
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Re: Snowy church lttp style
« Reply #1 on: October 09, 2007, 01:48:51 pm »
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Look nice the only thing that strikes me as weird is it's lack of windows. Normally churches have lots of windows.
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Re: Snowy church lttp style
« Reply #2 on: October 09, 2007, 02:02:44 pm »
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windows will be added, when ive fixed the walls so they are as they are supposed to be ^^
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« Reply #3 on: October 09, 2007, 02:46:22 pm »
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It's nice, but you missing some walls. I especially love those icicles.
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« Reply #4 on: October 09, 2007, 05:01:15 pm »
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Awesome sprite!

I recolored it for fun :P


Just a few problems with your sprite, you've used a few dark-grey colours too much.
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« Reply #5 on: October 09, 2007, 05:47:09 pm »
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The roof looks kinda strange if you ask me.
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« Reply #6 on: October 09, 2007, 08:35:50 pm »
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yeh, i am gonna use gradient on the dark gray parts, above the walls, but not the roof, also i agree about the roof, i dunno how to fix though!
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« Reply #7 on: October 09, 2007, 10:58:13 pm »
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Quote from: Norlem on October 09, 2007, 08:35:50 pm
yeh, i am gonna use gradient on the dark gray parts, above the walls, but not the roof, also i agree about the roof, i dunno how to fix though!
Maybe it's an idea to look really good on how Nintendo did it.
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« Reply #8 on: October 10, 2007, 02:23:44 am »
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The only thing I don't like is that it looks like 3 seperate buildings because the roofs are all seperated. Maybe make 1 roof that combines all 3 to make it look like it's 1 building and not 3 that's mooshed together?

And TRD, that's a pretty cool recolor. ;)
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Hm... I should probably put something here...

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« Reply #9 on: October 10, 2007, 07:39:22 am »
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Yea, put the roofs together,and it'll look way better.

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« Reply #10 on: October 10, 2007, 08:56:53 am »
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allright will put the roofs together ! ^^
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« Reply #11 on: October 10, 2007, 02:44:56 pm »
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Allright, for the empty part betwen roof and walls i added a gradient so it looks like the walls fade into darkness, also took away the part that saperated the different roofs, and had a look at the original roof from nintendo to make the side roofs look better, overall i think its getting better but still needs improvement,

Here is the preview:
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« Reply #12 on: October 11, 2007, 06:46:23 am »
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coming along nice :D
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« Reply #13 on: October 11, 2007, 04:14:30 pm »
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Where's the snow?
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« Reply #14 on: October 11, 2007, 06:01:40 pm »
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its being added to the next verision along with towers, and windows! :o
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« Reply #15 on: October 13, 2007, 03:39:47 pm »
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I feel that i am getting close to completion of my snowy church, but i dont wanna make updates that dosent look right so i am just gonna show the current verision of it, id love some C+C

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« Reply #16 on: October 13, 2007, 03:40:56 pm »
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It's looking very nice. :) The stained glass windows' colors are a bit bright though.
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« Reply #17 on: October 13, 2007, 04:34:32 pm »
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Looks great, personally I would change the cross to the Triforce.
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« Reply #18 on: October 14, 2007, 11:38:13 pm »
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Great!
The door looks a bit dark(just a bit) and you should change the cross to a Triforce (link isn't catholic ;))
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« Reply #19 on: October 16, 2007, 06:03:07 pm »
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Okay ill fix the door along with the cross to a triforce until next (hopefully last!) edit,
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