Some of your visuals obviously show some thought and planning, which I can appreciate. A lot of first-timers like to just "wing it" but you obviously know where the camera was going in your movement shots and I liked that a lot. The effects didn't look too bad either, particularly the bottle.
However, there's no real narrative here. I know you're going for the whole Paranormal Activity hidden camera thing, but there at least needs to be a reason for these shots other than "they look cool." I needed a reason to feel sorry for these people. Horror is not a genre where you should be "thinking" about the film, but there just needs to be more here. Some of the scenes also simply weren't scary, or even creepy. The effects scenes/bottle scenes are a perfect example of this. I found myself going "ooh, neato" rather than "ooh, creepy."
