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My girlfriend (WIP)
« on: December 19, 2006, 03:10:03 pm »
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Yeah, I just thought that I could sprite her, so here it is:

I think it came out pretty good, but some C+C would be nice.
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Re: My girlfriend (WIP)
« Reply #1 on: December 19, 2006, 03:15:45 pm »
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Well, it's great! I love the shading! The chin looks a bit weird, and the neck is basically just a cylinder, the hair seperates nicely, so overall it's a great pixel art :P. Nice work :).
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Re: My girlfriend (WIP)
« Reply #2 on: December 19, 2006, 03:21:56 pm »
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She's pretty. :) However the title (My girlfriend, Work in progress) made me wonder as to what work exactly was in progress with your girlfriend. XD

Is her face really that round? 'Cuz most people have more angular faces.
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Re: My girlfriend (WIP)
« Reply #3 on: December 19, 2006, 03:27:42 pm »
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looks pretty good, but lets see a photo for comparison  ;)
She's gonna kill me for this...
http://xs510.xs.to/xs510/06512/katsa.png
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Re: My girlfriend (WIP)
« Reply #4 on: December 19, 2006, 03:35:33 pm »
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So, erm.. is her name Katja or Katsa? :P
lol

Um, OK, well, your sprite's forehead is far too short, it doesn't allow for her proper haircut to really show right. As you can see from the picture, her hair goes up and then in a little to meet her hairline on the top fo her head, whereas yours goes staight to where the heairline would be if it kept going down to her forehead.

Also, the sprite's face is too wide and not angled enough. It also has virtually no chin.

The nose, also, is too thin, and doesn't grow wider near the bottom as it should, and does in the photo.

The lipstick goes to far out on the top lip before going down to meet the mouth.

And the eye, I believe, should be about a pixel taller (although I can see in the picture she's obviously making a bit of a face, I hope that my criticism is accurate)

Overall, it's quite nice, and Katja/Katsa/something is very pretty. :)

EDIT: Also the bangs on the left side (our left) look to short and too straight and smooth.
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Re: My girlfriend (WIP)
« Reply #5 on: December 19, 2006, 03:46:38 pm »
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So, erm.. is her name Katja or Katsa? :P
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Katja. Katsa was just my name for the file :P

Um, OK, well, your sprite's forehead is far too short, it doesn't allow for her proper haircut to really show right. As you can see from the picture, her hair goes up and then in a little to meet her hairline on the top fo her head, whereas yours goes staight to where the heairline would be if it kept going down to her forehead.

Also, the sprite's face is too wide and not angled enough. It also has virtually no chin.

The nose, also, is too thin, and doesn't grow wider near the bottom as it should, and does in the photo.

The lipstick goes to far out on the top lip before going down to meet the mouth.

And the eye, I believe, should be about a pixel taller (although I can see in the picture she's obviously making a bit of a face, I hope that my criticism is accurate)

Overall, it's quite nice, and Katja/Katsa/something is very pretty. :)

EDIT: Also the bangs on the left side (our left) look to short and too straight and smooth.
Thanks, I'll see what I can do. She sure is pretty... Lucky me :P
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Re: My girlfriend (WIP)
« Reply #6 on: December 19, 2006, 03:59:21 pm »
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Great, then. can't wait to see the final version. :)
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Re: My girlfriend (WIP)
« Reply #7 on: December 20, 2006, 01:13:15 am »
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I decided to do a small edit before seeing her face

yours --- mines
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Re: My girlfriend (WIP)
« Reply #8 on: December 20, 2006, 06:36:21 am »
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nice gf eh...... sprite but you shoulst work on her nose
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Re: My girlfriend (WIP)
« Reply #9 on: December 21, 2006, 09:13:08 pm »
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looks pretty good, but lets see a photo for comparison  ;)
She's gonna kill me for this...
http://xs510.xs.to/xs510/06512/katsa.png
I figured as much. Make her neck thinner! And her eyes kinda bigger. It will make it look more cuter. Other than that, it's way better than anything I'm able to deliver, hence I can't find anything bad about it... good job so far.
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Re: My girlfriend (WIP)
« Reply #10 on: December 21, 2006, 09:22:33 pm »
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looks pretty good, but lets see a photo for comparison  ;)
She's gonna kill me for this...
http://xs510.xs.to/xs510/06512/katsa.png

Next the topic title will be "My Ex (WIP)"  :P

Just kidding. Oh and great sprite so far.
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Re: My girlfriend (WIP)
« Reply #11 on: December 24, 2006, 08:06:30 am »
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I decided to do a small edit before seeing her face

yours --- mines
* Kren runs
Well, I prefer my version more, sry :P.
I figured as much. Make her neck thinner! And her eyes kinda bigger. It will make it look more cuter. Other than that, it's way better than anything I'm able to deliver, hence I can't find anything bad about it... good job so far.
Sounds like I'm doing somekind of plasticsurgery :D
Next the topic title will be "My Ex (WIP)"  :P

Just kidding. Oh and great sprite so far.
Thanks man!
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Re: My girlfriend (WIP)
« Reply #12 on: December 31, 2006, 02:48:15 am »
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I like Kren's edit better. Looking good so far.
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Re: My girlfriend (WIP)
« Reply #13 on: January 03, 2007, 02:37:57 pm »
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I was wondering why the name sounded familiar. I was going to ask that are you from Finland, but I don't have to since I looked your profile. Katja's a Finnish name. I'm from Finland as well.
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