I think you should work more on your project and do some research on other successful fangames to make your own have more quality. Only when you're on a more advanced state you should present it.
For now, make the view smaller, so it fits the Link to the Past style and makes it less amateur-ish. Your first screen is a bit resized, tiles aren't as normal, and screen too big for a way too small room - that's why the view should be smaller.
On the second screen it's too dark-greened, no need to have those spaces between the trees and the text should have been better written.
As for the title screen, it's not very Zelda-ish, Legend is either with a capital letter on "L" or every single letter in "The Legend Of" is capital. Also, Zelda means a fantasy world in the past, so, the fonts should be less... hum... futuristic...
Anyways, I hope you can turn your project the other way and good luck on it.
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