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Re: Chopik
« Reply #60 on: August 02, 2007, 12:36:22 am »
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I think him with a big neck makes him look phat. It'd rule if you could keep it short.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #61 on: August 02, 2007, 02:05:29 am »
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Elephant Legs = win.

Bright Colors = he's not an emo. he is a bright and happy character.

Phat Neck = by big i assume you mean width. i will make the neck skinnier tomorrow.

TO EVERYONE WHO HAS A PROBLEM WITH CHOPIK!

If I do not fix these problems it is cause I like the way they look. Everyone seems to like the first one best. Okay, if in his next match they do what I ask and use the updated artwork; just envision the artwork you like... AND VOTE CHOPIK! Whether he wins of loses, I will reveal the end of the story.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #62 on: August 02, 2007, 03:26:03 am »
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Envision the artwork we like? OK, how about this? I'll envision that the Red Shirt Boys are actually the cast of Doctor Who and vote for them. Right? Yeah? No. If people don't like the art, change it. Plus, your first image has got a nice area between being to desaturated and too bright. Your others are too bright. And the elephant legs take away the smooth, bubbly, organic look he has. They look clumsy and awful and new Chopik sucks - revert to first.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #63 on: August 02, 2007, 04:48:06 am »
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Quote from: Moldrill on August 02, 2007, 02:05:29 am
Elephant Legs = win.

Bright Colors = he's not an emo. he is a bright and happy character.

Phat Neck = by big i assume you mean width. i will make the neck skinnier tomorrow.

TO EVERYONE WHO HAS A PROBLEM WITH CHOPIK!

If I do not fix these problems it is cause I like the way they look. Everyone seems to like the first one best. Okay, if in his next match they do what I ask and use the updated artwork; just envision the artwork you like... AND VOTE CHOPIK! Whether he wins of loses, I will reveal the end of the story.

Moldrill, they're giving you constructive criticism about the drawing of your character. They're telling you what they think you can do to improve it. And seeing as this is a competition where you want people to like how you character is (not just yourself), it would be a good idea to consider their suggestions.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #64 on: August 02, 2007, 02:33:31 pm »
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I have considered their suggestions...

... D: Fine. I will give him a skinnier neck, bubbly legs, and more pastel colors. Anything else?
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #65 on: August 02, 2007, 09:06:45 pm »
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Evolution of a Chopiks. Again.

Now?
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« Reply #66 on: August 02, 2007, 09:11:02 pm »
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Fourth, but desaturate the colours a bit, please.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #67 on: August 02, 2007, 09:20:54 pm »
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..the original is still better, besides the neck. The legs coming out of the body instead of from underneath just look odd however it's done. And the other color on the lowe rhal fof the stomach on the original looks very nice.. as does the solid outline.

Basically the only thing about the original that isn't as good is the straight neck. Number 2 had the best neck shape.
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« Reply #68 on: August 02, 2007, 09:27:36 pm »
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Yeah, I agree with Kame on the neck :D
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #69 on: August 02, 2007, 09:30:00 pm »
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Three is still the best. You're all nuts. Especially Kame.
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« Reply #70 on: August 02, 2007, 09:32:16 pm »
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For me the first one is still better.

I'd recommend using the second one's body with the colors of the first one. Then adding some shading to the face (but different from the second one's shading)
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« Reply #71 on: August 02, 2007, 09:48:51 pm »
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The fourth does have shading on the face. Its a slight gradient.

It seems that here I cannot please everyone. I do not wish to lose votes for these silly little things. Although I will try and follow as much of your advice I cannot do everything that everyone wants. This should not change who you vote for. These are just details. The important thing is the concept is liked.

As for the legs coming off the front, it makes him seem much nicer looking in my opinion. It looks like he is in a sitting position almost. I always thought the old legs looked awkward. They don't make sense if you think about it. I seem to have lost the file for the first two Chopik's unfortunately so I hope the newest one has made some more people a bit happier.

I gave him bubbly legs like asked for, although I did not make them odd like the old ones. And I gave him a skinnier neck.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #72 on: August 02, 2007, 10:42:04 pm »
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The "odd" old ones are nice because they're ver smooth and come straight out of the body like everything else in the image. And no you probably can't please everyone. But you can please the majority that prefers desaturated colors and a skinny neck.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #73 on: August 02, 2007, 11:11:24 pm »
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I have made the neck skinnier. I am too tired today to desaturate the colors. And I still dont see why. Give me a good reason to and I will desaturate them tomorrow.
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« Reply #74 on: August 02, 2007, 11:30:29 pm »
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Chopik wins.
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« Reply #75 on: August 02, 2007, 11:59:47 pm »
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I would have to say not Kame. I have some complaints with yours. I dislike whatever effect you used on your outlines. And again I dislike his old legs. I will desaturate the colors tomorrow but other than that you have no reason for disliking the new one.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #76 on: August 03, 2007, 12:07:12 am »
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Hai I desaturated him by a very incredibly small amount. :D

NEW   SLIGHTLY OLD
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #77 on: August 03, 2007, 12:32:50 am »
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I know, the lines went wonky when I traced your image into Inkscape, but I kind of like it - it has a nice free-flowing feel to it. Anyway, it's just an example of the ideal Chopik.
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Re: Chopik
« Reply #78 on: August 03, 2007, 01:15:08 am »
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Your ideal Chopik perhaps. Mine is the third of course.

And yes, Chopik does win.
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« Reply #79 on: August 03, 2007, 07:20:14 pm »
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I voted Chopik :D :D!!! Atleased, I think I did....
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