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Burn Out
« on: June 26, 2012, 07:47:40 pm »
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Let me tell you a story, a story of an ordinary human as you...
Long time ago, someone fell into a deep sleep. In that sleep the person dreamed about a creature that he never had seen before.
That creature requested the person to come closer because the creature wanted to tell he something.
Without hesitation he steped closer and heard what the creature wanted to tell.
But it didn't come so, because the person awaked.

Exactly on this night knocked the frontdoor of the person. Visitors at this time?
Before the person had opened the door it knocked again. This time, however, it was not from the frontdoor, but the door from the basement.
The person walked carefully to the basement and opened the door - But nobody was there.
Suddenly the person felt a hard hit and fell into faint.

"Where were you? I requested you to come closer, but you didn't come!" - The person heard again a voice in the dream.
But that time it sounded like another, it sounded like a voice of a creature that begun to go off.
"Now you will receive your fair punishment!" - called the creature and it became warmer and warmer.
Finally, it was so hot, that the dream of the person burned out. As a result the person got a lasting damage.

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Since then, doctors regard this status as a "Burnout"




« Last Edit: July 13, 2012, 09:16:30 pm by Rayo »
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Re: Burn Out
« Reply #1 on: June 26, 2012, 09:41:59 pm »
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I love the subtlety in the story telling, probably my favorite character so far.
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