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custom link art
« on: June 27, 2007, 10:34:55 am »
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i haven't bin on for about a year.
but my drawing has improved quite abit. this is a rough link pic.
i want to fix up the small things(like his 2 short arms) but give me some feedback before i colour it
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« Reply #1 on: June 27, 2007, 10:51:13 am »
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Kay, it's all very nice and all, but it looks like a goat... just the shape of the head for some reason <__<; reminds me of the stuff uma draws.
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« Reply #2 on: June 27, 2007, 11:35:57 am »
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ouch burn :(
what is it about the head that is so much like a goat.
i can't improve without specific comments
(no offence ment)
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« Reply #3 on: June 28, 2007, 09:08:54 am »
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No offense, but that just isn't very good. You could improve the face by making it shorter and moving the nose up.
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« Reply #4 on: June 28, 2007, 09:59:08 am »
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sorry but it doesnt look like link... it doesnt even look ehm... hylan(human)

try another style... maby moree chibi
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Re: custom link art
« Reply #5 on: June 28, 2007, 11:24:21 am »
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again specifics
why doesnt he look human. i know he has some anatomcal problems which im working on
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« Reply #6 on: June 28, 2007, 02:03:31 pm »
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again specifics
why doesnt he look human. i know he has some anatomcal problems which im working on
okay specifics, I'll post them for you.

Head: His head looks really like a goat, too big chin. His mouth how he's looking is very weird. Make his nose some more pointy to let him look like Link. His hair are not spiky, He has long hair more like "grass" than "spikes" (I don't know how it's called). His ears are too thin, You can make it at least some wider. The eyes how he looks is very weird, make the eyes (pupils) both to the same direction. The right eye needs to be a bit higher.

Body: Normal human don't stand like that, Make his chest some lower and Legs some more to the right.

Arms/Hands: The piece from his clothes to arms is too pointy, that makes it looks like a third hand. His hands looks like a half Eagle-Goat hand. Try to give him "Fingers" to let it look human, and also the hand structure doesn't sense.

Legs/Feet: Under his kokiri costume (where the legs/pants begin) you made him looks like he stands from the front, Move it a bit to the right to make him look more like he's looking to the right. His pants are too thin, Make him bigger or give him more muscles because the formation of your whole drawing is like you tried to make someone who is very strong, so give him muscles.

Conclusion: Next time when you try to draw link, use an example next to you. So you can look how link looks like. Tutorials for human body and clothes are also very useful. I hope I helped you to improve it, I can't wait to see improvement for your next art.

PS: Sorry for bad grammar, English is my 4th language..
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Re: custom link art
« Reply #7 on: June 29, 2007, 05:06:56 am »
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good god

GET THIS MAN SOME NON ANIME ART AND AN ANATOMY BOOK STAT
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« Reply #8 on: June 29, 2007, 05:08:32 am »
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... It looks like a horse.
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Re: custom link art
« Reply #9 on: June 29, 2007, 07:33:57 am »
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good god

GET THIS MAN SOME NON ANIME ART AND AN ANATOMY BOOK STAT
thankyou. u are very kind

i already said the anatomy is off
and a thankyou to dragonboy, that actually helps

new mugshot

« Last Edit: June 29, 2007, 07:59:15 am by cuff »
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« Reply #10 on: June 30, 2007, 03:56:51 am »
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comments psz
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« Reply #11 on: July 01, 2007, 09:09:43 am »
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It's a big improvement over the old one, but still not very good. You need to make cleaner lines and add some shading.
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« Reply #12 on: July 01, 2007, 10:59:54 am »
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good god

GET THIS MAN SOME NON ANIME ART AND AN ANATOMY BOOK STAT
thankyou. u are very kind

i already said the anatomy is off
and a thankyou to dragonboy, that actually helps

new mugshot


Nice! He looks very human now, I shall say: Keep it up!
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Re: custom link art
« Reply #13 on: July 17, 2007, 05:22:46 pm »
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don't forget that eyes are at the center of the head not higher or lower just in the middle.
Very nice though
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« Reply #14 on: July 18, 2007, 10:28:39 pm »
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It's better now. Still, it rather looks wrong. The hair looks off, random and all.  There's no detail, no texture, no shading, nothing, nowhere. You do have a long way ahead of you, just keep trying and trying until you get there.

good god

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thankyou. u are very kind
He's right though.
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« Reply #15 on: July 19, 2007, 08:47:03 am »
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indeed, but all mangas have there own style, so you can't realy tell what is right and wrong.
Not only that, but most of the manga are made in human anatomy ways (don't know how to wright this down proper...)
exept for the eyes and stuff, most manga have big (ready to cry) eyes. but not all of them do.

You already knew this, but just in case some people didn't:
Anime: Manga style animated (like cartoons, movies, etc)
Manga: just manga, but it's not animated (comic, drawing, etc)
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« Reply #16 on: July 19, 2007, 12:59:22 pm »
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this is more like a restart but as  this has been hanging around my room for a couple of weeks and the topic seems to have renewed interest im posting it
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« Reply #17 on: July 19, 2007, 07:02:17 pm »
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I stand by my original comment for the picture in the first post: it's a goat or horse wearing Link's clothes, seriously.

The second "mugshot" was much better. Definitely human, and it actually looked a bit like Link. You were definitely doing something right there, but I'm not sure what.

The third drawing, the one before this post, it's just horrible. Bad colouring, bad pose, bad anatomy. Link is bent, his head is squashed, his arms are not the same length, etc. - and the face looks almost mutilated.

Go back to the mugshot and start again from there. That was the last place it looked good.
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