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General => ZFGC Character Competition 2007 => Events => Archive => Characters => Topic started by: cuff on July 06, 2007, 07:16:58 am

Title: <DEFEATED> Pitch
Post by: cuff on July 06, 2007, 07:16:58 am: (http://i14.tinypic.com/62ss0mv.jpg)

her name is pitch (yes it's a girl)
(if u have a low brightness computer she might not show, she's very dark)

(http://i15.tinypic.com/6bo2kok.jpg)
Pitch grew up a noble in her country. However being a tomboy and being ambidextrous, she made no friends.

(http://i18.tinypic.com/4tqbk0i.jpg)
Her parents gave her and her sister up for dead the moment of their birth, due to a life threatening disease that only affected women in the family. However due to a abnormality she survived but with pains.

(http://i13.tinypic.com/4zyk8dl.jpg)
Her sister had different luck.

(http://i12.tinypic.com/4tk55wp.jpg)
she then...

(http://i13.tinypic.com/4py9qwo.jpg)
However due to quick action she survived, yet her hand was amputated.

(http://i17.tinypic.com/53rqnwj.jpg)
She was given a psychologist, who put her in a suit so as to prevent a second attempt. She left with her psychologist to find a reason to live.
Title: Re: Pitch
Post by: Domo on July 06, 2007, 07:58:44 am: REALLY dark. Seriously, I can't see anything. As far as I can tell it must be a flying unicorn that is bleeding all over the place....
Title: Re: Pitch
Post by: cuff on July 06, 2007, 08:15:58 am: i put red around the edge so u can see her more clearly
that better.
Title: Re: Pitch
Post by: NeoGeo-x on July 06, 2007, 12:07:05 pm: Try a transparent background, the picture is still somewhat unclear..

When you get the story up, I'll edit this post and tell you what my thoughts are on this character.. I can't tell yet.
Title: Re: Pitch
Post by: sjegtp on July 06, 2007, 02:17:32 pm: I can't see anything, even though the brightness of my screen is in the maximum.

I had to quadruplicate the brightness of the image to be able to see her face.

I attached the quadruplicated image, if anyone wants to see it.
Title: Re: Pitch
Post by: Moldrill on July 06, 2007, 07:19:07 pm: I can see it fine. Nice job. Though I am not all that fond of emo stories, if characters commit suicide they dont deserve to win this thing. :P
Title: Re: Pitch
Post by: Kren on July 07, 2007, 05:08:55 am: Quote from: Moldrill on July 06, 2007, 07:19:07 pm
I can see it fine. Nice job. Though I am not all that fond of emo stories, if characters commit suicide they dont deserve to win this thing. :P
Your monitor is really messed up if you can see it.
Title: Re: Pitch
Post by: Moldrill on July 07, 2007, 05:09:42 am: No. My moniter is mac. :P
Title: Re: Pitch
Post by: cuff on July 07, 2007, 09:05:28 am: no it means ur moniter is WORSE than ours.
Title: Re: Pitch
Post by: Dayjo on July 07, 2007, 10:38:12 am: I can see it fine too. My monitor is great :)
Title: Re: Pitch
Post by: cuff on July 11, 2007, 09:19:16 am: just put the story in
prty plz coment