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<DEFEATED> Pitch
« on: July 06, 2007, 07:16:58 am »
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her name is pitch (yes it's a girl)
(if u have a low brightness computer she might not show, she's very dark)



Pitch grew up a noble in her country. However being a tomboy and being ambidextrous, she made no friends.


Her parents gave her and her sister up for dead the moment of their birth, due to a life threatening disease that only affected women in the family. However due to a abnormality she survived but with pains.


Her sister had different luck.


she then...


However due to quick action she survived, yet her hand was amputated.


She was given a psychologist, who put her in a suit so as to prevent a second attempt. She left with her psychologist to find a reason to live.
« Last Edit: July 19, 2007, 08:18:41 pm by NeoGeo-x »
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Re: Pitch
« Reply #1 on: July 06, 2007, 07:58:44 am »
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REALLY dark. Seriously, I can't see anything.  As far as I can tell it must be a flying unicorn that is bleeding all over the place....
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You rich !@#$%. I wish I could afford AIDs.
Payback's a !@#$% :P BTW Mamoruanime was here
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Re: Pitch
« Reply #2 on: July 06, 2007, 08:15:58 am »
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i put red around the edge so u can see her more clearly
that better.
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Re: Pitch
« Reply #3 on: July 06, 2007, 12:07:05 pm »
  • I choose you, Zorua!
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Try a transparent background, the picture is still somewhat unclear..

When you get the story up, I'll edit this post and tell you what my thoughts are on this character.. I can't tell yet.
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My name is Pitt
Re: Pitch
« Reply #4 on: July 06, 2007, 02:17:32 pm »
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I can't see anything, even though the brightness of my screen is in the maximum.

I had to quadruplicate the brightness of the image to be able to see her face.

I attached the quadruplicated image, if anyone wants to see it.
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Re: Pitch
« Reply #5 on: July 06, 2007, 07:19:07 pm »
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I can see it fine. Nice job. Though I am not all that fond of emo stories, if characters commit suicide they dont deserve to win this thing. :P
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Re: Pitch
« Reply #6 on: July 07, 2007, 05:08:55 am »
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I can see it fine. Nice job. Though I am not all that fond of emo stories, if characters commit suicide they dont deserve to win this thing. :P
Your monitor is really messed up if you can see it.
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Re: Pitch
« Reply #7 on: July 07, 2007, 05:09:42 am »
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No. My moniter is mac. :P
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Re: Pitch
« Reply #8 on: July 07, 2007, 09:05:28 am »
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no it means ur moniter is WORSE than ours.
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Re: Pitch
« Reply #9 on: July 07, 2007, 10:38:12 am »
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I can see it fine too. My monitor is great :)
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Re: Pitch
« Reply #10 on: July 11, 2007, 09:19:16 am »
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just put the story in
prty plz coment
« Last Edit: July 12, 2007, 01:40:12 am by cuff »
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