Okay i'm making errors too
but i know that you're german speaking so thats okay... btw i found the text data so its now a little easier
And yay i find the ENTER mechanic in the name menu so much smoother now
Deine aktuelle Anzahl an Rubine sind:
Deine aktuelle Anzahl an Rubinen ist:
Du hast eine Traumscherbe gefunden! Das ist eins von vielen Teilen, die über ganz Aurelia zerbrochen worden sind. Der Eremit am Friedhof könnte daran sehr interessiert sein.
Here i suggest a changing of text the "teile" part sounds wrong since its a shard and you dont say in a zelda game stuff like "Ey heb das Teil mal auf da"
Du hast eine Traumscherbe gefunden! Sie ist eine von vielen Splittern, die über ganz Aurelia verteilt wurden. Der Erimit am Friedhof könnte daran sehr interessiert sein
in english that would be (i guess)
You found a Dreamshard! It is one of many pieces, which were shattered all over Aurelia. The Hermit at the graveyard could be very interested in this
but my english could be better i guess ^^;
and why do you tell the player exactly who to find? examples from past game would be (Minish Cap) You cant go through without "sword skills" and then somewhere you find or hear from the swordschool, go there and then you can pass through... so maybe tell just that there is someone at the graveyard who could be interested in that shard?
okay last one and i think i',m through with the german translation of your engine demo xD
here is the english and german a little different so i guess i try here my luck... the biggest thing on the old text in german was the "werfen"
You got the Slingshot! Use this projectile-shooting weapon to fling Deku Seeds at your foes! Assign this item to a button on the item menu.
Du hast eine Schleuder erhalten! Benutze diese Fernkampfwaffe um Deku-Kerne auf deine Feinde zu feuern! Weise dieses Item einen Knopf im Itemmenü zu.
I would have used "Steinschleuder" or "Zwille" but official Zelda games have "Schleuder" in common. then, the projectile-shooting could have been used 1:1 as "Projektil schießende" and for fling i would have used "schleudern" but since we already have it as the itemname i used "feuern" instead.
so now i'm through with your textfile
edit:
okay some stuf i've noticed
Octorocks:
1. Their stones are supposed to be glitchy looking white?
2. You can kill them with a shield, throwing back their projectiles?
3. they kill themselfs with shooting stones! O.o
edit2:
just played a link between worlds and have a possible other heartcontainer text for you