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Title: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 15, 2012, 12:48:12 am
Name: Jack (it's a reference to Jack Sparrow  :P)
Age: 28
Race: shiekah
Location:???
Description: Jack is a pirate of the sea, who's goal is to get every treasure in earth. He's in his late twenties. He wears a pair of brown boots and brown pants, a red waistcoast, a white shirt and a Black pirate hat. He's always in a rush, as he's a thief. He's great at parkour, good enough that he teaches Link wall-running.
He left the crew at the age of twent, because of not being able to find treasures. He got upset from this, and blamed his companions. Though, he kind of hates them, he also misses his old days as a pirate. He's crew still awaits his return, as he was the best captain they ever had. In many places he's a wanted criminal.

Name: Guillermo (William in spanish. Another reference)
Age: 25
Race: Zora
Location: Lake Hylia
Description: a young Zora, and a close friend to Jack. They met in an island in the south of the world (no idea how the world is called) (this islands would be something like the Caribean Islands), when Jack was searching for some treasure, and Guillermo ordered him to stop; Jack continued digging, and Guillermo got mad, and attacked him. Then, a sword fight began, and fought until sunset. Jack recognized his abilities with the sword, and took him in his crew.
As he isn't native from Hryule, or any close areas, so his accent is totally different (his accent is like a person who talks spanish, and just began to talk in english). Sometimes, for this, he'll confuse words, and say words in his native language. Although he's a Zora, his parents decided to go somewhere else when he was a little kid, so he was the only zora, together with his parents, to live oustide the Kingdom of Hyrule.
Guillermo is a calmed person, who doesn't like fight too much. He's strong-willed, and will protect everyone who believes that should be defended. When Jack left the crew, he went to Lake Hylia, and taught other zoras how to be a swordsman (in case that my Zorka submission is accepted, he's taught by the Zorka). He wears a pair of black trousers, with a sheath for his sword on the left; a white shirt, and over it, a green waistcoast.

Name: Catherine (or with K, I don't know)
Age: 27
Race: Gerudo
Location:
Description: though she's a gerudo, she lives on the Rich side of Hyrule, as a maid to some rich family. Link meets when ge goes to the Rich side of Hyrule, after completing the Forest Temple. She'll protect Link from some guards, claiming that Link is her cousin. She'll tell Link that she protected him, because she didn't believe that there should be a division between richs and poors.
She fell in love with Jack when he recruited her from some desert monsters, in the Gerudo Desert. She asked Jack if she could join him on the treasure hunt. He didn't care, as long as she did something and didn't budder him.
She wears black pants, a pair of black boots, a white shirt and a violet waistcoast.

Piedra:
Age: 27 in Hylian years
Location: Goron Mountains
Description:
Piedra is a goron that was recruited by Jack two years before his gang was disbanded. He's a goron carrying a blue coat and a red bandanda with a skull in its right. He may look strong, angry, and always ready to fight, but the truth that he's really calmed, and wants to have a nice and relaxed life. He speaks aggresively so Jack doesn't believe that he's not tough
Sometime ago, when Jack was passing by the Goron Mountains, a rock slide happened. Luckily, Piedra was close and was able to save him. Since they became good friends after that, Piedra helped very much Jack on his journey. Though to his tough-looking, and his aggresive attitude, it makes contrast with Guillermo's calmed and relaxed attitude, and they're often fighting. The only one that truly knows Piedra is Catherine.
Title: Re: [Submission] Tetra and his crew
Post by: Diminish on September 15, 2012, 01:11:46 am
It seems odd to introduce Tetra as a side-character, given that Zelda is defined in the King of Thieves story in a different role which would not give her time to have a unnoticeable pirate double-llife (even if it was kind of done in a Sheik way).
Title: Re: [Submission] Tetra and his crew
Post by: Malon on September 15, 2012, 01:15:14 am
One thing: Tetra is a woman, yet the title says "his". Other than that it really doesn't seem to fit in weel with the rest of the game, and comes off as a cameo for the purpose of a cameo.
Title: Re: [Submission] Tetra and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 15, 2012, 01:16:58 am
One thing: Tetra is a woman, yet the title says "his".

*facepalm* COME ON, WHAT'S WITH ME, CAN'T I WRITE RIGHT ONE TIME?!
Title: Re: [Submission] Tetra and HER crew
Post by: Kami on September 15, 2012, 01:25:05 am
It's alright, English is my native language and I still mess up, so everyone makes mistakes.
Title: Re: [Submission] Tetra and HER crew
Post by: Max. on September 15, 2012, 01:57:14 am
I don't really think this is doable, since Tetra is Zelda, and we already have Zelda. What ideas do you have as far as making that work, Blaze?
Title: Re: [Submission] Tetra and HER crew
Post by: Kami on September 15, 2012, 01:58:43 am
Time paradox?

someone must've played the song of time and something ended up going wrong.
Title: Re: [Submission] Tetra and HER crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 15, 2012, 02:01:56 am
I don't really think this is doable, since Tetra is Zelda, and we already have Zelda. What ideas do you have as far as making that work, Blaze?

I never understood this. Didn't Tetra had Zelda's spirit? It always confused me. But it could be another Tetra, who doesn't have Zelda's spirit, and makes an importnant cameo in the game!
Title: Re: [Submission] Tetra and HER crew
Post by: Malon on September 15, 2012, 02:07:52 am
No Blaze,
Show content
Tetra WAS Zelda the whole time.
Title: Re: [Submission] Tetra and HER crew
Post by: MG-Zero on September 15, 2012, 03:08:09 pm
I don't think Tetra herself will work in this, I do however like finding the crew mates as a sidequest.  The piracy theme of the character also fits in an odd way.  Perhaps if you made this character *not* Tetra?
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 15, 2012, 03:13:34 pm
I'll have to think some new name, so for now, it'll be NOT Tetra and HER crew
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: Kami on September 15, 2012, 03:14:09 pm
It could be a Tetra Imposter.  ;)
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: thestig on September 15, 2012, 09:30:51 pm
Well.. Tetra imposter? Yeah, if the game was within boundaries of the events of Wind Waker. Because of that, this idea really isn't workable to make sense. Or unless you mean to say that this is a "pirate"-esque character, then I don't know how this could really be worked into the design. =\

You see my reasoning here?
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: Kami on September 15, 2012, 09:51:13 pm
I kinda meant a new charactor that is similar but different at the same time.

So, Yah, a new pirete-esque charactor is what I meant. :P
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: thestig on September 15, 2012, 10:49:10 pm
Well, that doesn't change much until the "new character" is actually designed. We're kind of far in development as far as the major characters go, so if anything this would have to be limited to a side thing.

That being said, I feel really iffy about this idea...
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: MG-Zero on September 15, 2012, 10:50:36 pm
The issue with pirates is that they fit, but they don't fit.  They fit because well..pirates are thieves.  They don't fit because where in the !@#$% are we going to stick them in the game?  Unless we have them somehow shipwrecked in the river, which I guess could open into an ocean that the player just doesn't have access to. 

As GM said, this would have to be a side quest and not tied in with the main quest at all.
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 15, 2012, 11:11:43 pm
What about if it was Tetra's Mother? It was stated that Tetra was left in charge of the crew when her mother left
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: Kren on September 16, 2012, 12:09:41 am
how about the crew appears without tetra, and they are more like mentors to Link and friends with Faron, yet you find them in different parts, they are also good thieves like Link.
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 16, 2012, 12:20:14 am
how about the crew appears without tetra, and they are more like mentors to Link and friends with Faron, yet you find them in different parts, they are also good thieves like Link.

Interesting. You mean, something like a side-quest? Something you must get them together?
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: Kren on September 16, 2012, 12:37:22 am
how about the crew appears without tetra, and they are more like mentors to Link and friends with Faron, yet you find them in different parts, they are also good thieves like Link.

Interesting. You mean, something like a side-quest? Something you must get them together?
not really quest, more like part of the story you will find them in different areas to help you or the other way around.
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: Kami on September 16, 2012, 12:39:28 am
That would kind of make Nigel useless then, if you think about it.

Because you encounter nigel all over hyrule.

I'm not sure if encountering two different peoples in the same area would be good.
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 16, 2012, 12:50:28 am
That would kind of make Nigel useless then, if you think about it.

Because you encounter nigel all over hyrule.

I'm not sure if encountering two different peoples in the same area would be good.

I think he means something like, each of them are scattered through the world, and you find them, some dialogue, and that.
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: Kami on September 16, 2012, 12:53:02 am
Welp, I'm definitly tired, sorry 'bout that, I guess I misunderstood it.
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: Zaeranos on September 16, 2012, 10:38:15 am
I have to agree with MG on this. Pirates fit and don't fit. I am a bit conflict about. However it is better to scrap the Tetra thing and any references. I do not think it will fit very well.
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: MG-Zero on September 16, 2012, 02:54:20 pm
I agree, the Tetra references should be dropped completely.
Title: Re: [Submission] NOT Tetra and HER crew
Post by: Max. on September 16, 2012, 08:00:32 pm
I was gonna say, what about the pirate from OOX? The Skull Pirate and his crew? They were awesome, I really liked them. We could have him in as a little side quest where his ship has run aground somewhere and you need to find his crew so they can set sail. His crew could be scattered in the local area, or all over the world.
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 17, 2012, 12:14:35 pm
Updated and changed the topic's name
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 17, 2012, 10:20:31 pm
Updated the topic (again) (sorry for the double-post)
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: Zaeranos on September 18, 2012, 04:28:04 am
I know they are linked together, but perhaps it is best to move the sidequest part to the Sidquests board. It will allow you to develop it a lot better. Here it kinda mixes with developing the character.
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 18, 2012, 11:38:38 am
Well, then I'm erasing the sidequest part, and wait until is approved/revise/rejected.
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 19, 2012, 10:39:41 pm
It'd be nice some feedback. Is this a so horrible entry?
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 24, 2012, 10:36:46 pm
Update: Added two more pirates (Guillermo and Catherine).
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: thestig on September 27, 2012, 01:25:02 am
Well.. I think what kills this submission is the pirate aspect about it. The world's kind of supposed to be based around Hyrule. But I think the modified approach with Jack being a clever thief is a good approach. Honestly, he should just be a thief all together from the Gerudo Desert, or something.

Gulliermo could probably have something to do with Lake Hylia rather than a random island in the world.. not so sure about Catherine living on the rich side of Hyrule Town as that contradicts A LOT of the story. If she wasn't a Gerudo it would make sense. Jack should be a Gerudo and Catherine should be a Hylian. I know what you're trying to go for here and I think that would solve that issue there.

Not too sure how I feel about Gulliermo. I'll just leave it to another person to give their thoughts on that, I suppose.
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: Zhello on September 27, 2012, 01:27:21 am
Well.. I think what kills this submission is the pirate aspect about it. The world's kind of supposed to be based around Hyrule. But I think the modified approach with Jack being a clever thief is a good approach. Honestly, he should just be a thief all together from the Gerudo Desert, or something.

Gulliermo could probably have something to do with Lake Hylia rather than a random island in the world.. not so sure about Catherine living on the rich side of Hyrule Town as that contradicts A LOT of the story. If she wasn't a Gerudo it would make sense. Jack should be a Gerudo and Catherine should be a Hylian. I know what you're trying to go for here and I think that would solve that issue there.

Not too sure how I feel about Gulliermo. I'll just leave it to another person to give their thoughts on that, I suppose.

Or he can be like a wannabe theif that has a few of his men in cavarans or something, Link can meet with him when Jack and his crew caravan breaks down after trying to get away from someone.  :-\
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: thestig on September 27, 2012, 01:29:25 am
Well.. I think what kills this submission is the pirate aspect about it. The world's kind of supposed to be based around Hyrule. But I think the modified approach with Jack being a clever thief is a good approach. Honestly, he should just be a thief all together from the Gerudo Desert, or something.

Gulliermo could probably have something to do with Lake Hylia rather than a random island in the world.. not so sure about Catherine living on the rich side of Hyrule Town as that contradicts A LOT of the story. If she wasn't a Gerudo it would make sense. Jack should be a Gerudo and Catherine should be a Hylian. I know what you're trying to go for here and I think that would solve that issue there.

Not too sure how I feel about Gulliermo. I'll just leave it to another person to give their thoughts on that, I suppose.


Or he can be like a wannabe theif that has a few of his men in cavarans or something, Link can meet with him when Jack and his crew caravan breaks down after trying to get away from someone.  :-\
Good idea. ;p The whole gist here is that, there's a bagillion ways someone could go about writing this character. It has to be anything but a pirate though.
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 27, 2012, 01:29:53 am
Well, the other day thought something about making her Hylian, and Jack a shiekah. He got away from town in his days of youth. And maybe, yes, making them a thief gang!

Guillermo. Pure Guillermo. It though of a character that was, like, away from Hyrule, and his accent was like me in my first days trying to talk english  XD.
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: Zaeranos on September 28, 2012, 06:38:24 am
Okay, I shall put my 2 cents in then. I was actually hoping to see the sidequest idea first. Because like GM said the pirate aspect is sort of iffy. However, it does not kill the submission. It could work, if you can give a very good reason why all of them are so far out of their comfort zone. And looking for treasure is not a good reason.

Of the three pirates you presented I like Guillermo the best. A sea based zora is an awesome idea. You can have some personality traits about the freshwater, that it feels funny. With his back story I would have to say "less is more" and "keep it simple". For example how he joined Jack's crew it would sufficto say that "Jack was impressed by his skills with sword when they ended up in fight." Because why would Guillermo order Jack to stop digging.

Jack is decent in setup. Simple and to the point. However he lacks a good reason why he is outside his comfort zone. But the pirate aspect makes it a character that very much depends on the sidequest involved. I urge you to put up an idea for the sidequest in the sidequest board. On the case of race I disagree with GM. Making him a Gerudo would not go well, unless you want to change his gender. It clashes withhe Gerudo mythos. The Gerudo are a race of women, where a man is born only once every 100 years. Farin is the current one and Ganondorf is the Gerudo of a 100 years ago. So those spots are pretty much taken.

With Catherine I am the least comfortable. I applaud you for making a character that is not Hylian. And we could use some Gerudo. However the Gerudo have been exiled to the desert and not seen anymore by Hylians. However the Seikah are actively keeping them out of Hyrule. If we have to many Gerudo running around Castle Town it would destroy that illusion. SO my advice is either to change the race or change the location of this character.
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She fell in love with Jack when he recruited her from some desert monsters, in the Gerudo Desert. She asked Jack if she could join him on the treasure hunt. He didn't care, as long as she did something and didn't budder him.
This part is also a bit iffy.
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on September 29, 2012, 02:02:28 am
I wouldn't like to make things too hard, so I'm explaining some things, changing others, and using your feedback for this.

Jack: a sheikah that was raised outside of Hyrule. He often goes to the town to steal food and money. He's a wanted criminal. He's somewhat stubborn, and he will never let himself lose, even when he's defeated, what sometimes help him on fighting.

Guillermo: Guillermo is a close friend to Jack since they met and had a sword fight for reasons not-well explained (it's always confusing the story of how they met). He tries to make Jack see that he's wrong, what leads them to a constant fight.

Catherine: a gerudo born in the gerudo desert, but didn't like how the Gerudo had to live, and they were kicked out of Hyrules, so she decided to change things. She wants peace between the two races. She joined Jack's gang for unknown reasons.
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on October 20, 2012, 10:11:59 pm
Though it's yet unfinished, does anyone have any comments on this?
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: thestig on October 20, 2012, 10:17:52 pm
Proceed as you were, this is a much better approach.

I want to see you develop this idea further as what you have right now seems like a good start. Jack as the troubled, but good-hearted guy... Guilermo as the guy who see's the good in people, but restrains Jack and takes abuse as a result. And Catherine, the outcast who has no place.

Now, you need to figure out a purpose for them. I honestly envision this group as another gang in Hyrule Town, but who knows.. Figure out a place, or places for them to be found at as the next option. Perhaps you can have Link assist Jack in some "jobs"? Hmm?
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on October 20, 2012, 10:22:25 pm
I want to see you develop this idea further as what you have right now seems like a good start. Jack as the troubled, but good-hearted guy... Guilermo as the guy who see's the good in people, but restrains Jack and takes abuse as a result. And Catherine, the outcast who has no place.

It seems you got the right idea.

They are actually a travelling gang, so they don't stay too long on the place they go. Jack is a wanted criminal in Hyrule, so he's the main candidate not to stay. I was thinking on making Jack learn teach Link some thief technique, such as tightrope walking, wall running or so. After all, he's a thief!

Their main puropse would be to get them back together, and as the story develops, and Link visits more places, he'll find more members. I'm planning to make a total of 7 members, and try to alternate races.
Title: Re: [Submission] Jack and his crew
Post by: Max. on November 01, 2012, 06:06:31 pm
Alright, so this hasn't seen development in like a week, but if you're planning 7 members... 7 is too many. I think 1 or 2 more tops. And also, mention the sidequest in the first post, that the object is to find them all and get them back together so they can sail the seas once more.

Also, please describe each character's role before Link reunites them too. For instance, the Gerudo living in Rich Hyrule town, what is she doing there? Does she work in a cafe? What will she say when Link meets her? Etc.
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: Zaeranos on November 01, 2012, 07:54:08 pm
Well, I don't see the OP altered from my last post. But I must say that I am not to fond of the races. Especially Catherine being a Gerudo. There would be too many Gerudo roaming in Castle Town, which makes the Sheikah keeping the Gerudo out seem incompetent.
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: Max. on November 01, 2012, 08:45:13 pm
There are Shiekah keeping the Gerudo out of Hyrule Town? I had no idea!

But yeah, there is a problem with putting Gerudo in Hyrule Town, since the townsters didn't know there were still Gerudo until Ganon showed up. However... Farin has been in town for quite some time. Has nobody seen him, do people just not recognize him as no hylian, or does he wear like a hood to keep people from realizing? I vote hood.
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on November 01, 2012, 09:58:25 pm
Jack is a shiekah, and Catherine is the gerudo. And, again, he's a thief! Just like Link, that's why nobody sees him!
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: Max. on November 02, 2012, 01:34:36 am
No, Niek was saying that Shiekah were keeping Gerudo out of Castle Town, which I didn't know they were doing. I think we'll decide those specifics later when we discuss the conflict in the desert, but what we're saying is that Catherine is a Gerudo, and the people of Castle Town thought the Gerudo were extinct. So why would they think that if a Gerudo lives in castle town, as that's where you put her location?
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: Zaeranos on November 02, 2012, 05:44:27 am
No, what I meant was that the Sheikah guards the border of Hyrule with Gerudo desert. They keep the Gerudo out of Hyrule. And as the Sheikah are the servants of the Royal Family, some may make there appearance in Castle Town.

The Gerudo King may have requested an audience and was probably allowed in. Farin is a male Gerudo, less common and thus are more easily overseen. Especially as there only should be one every generation. Aveil is still a child brought in by a merchant. Lastly Farin and Aveil are poor and in the gang, thus they probably stay out of sight of the rich and the guards.

Catherine is a servant of a rich family. She is pretty much in the picture. Walking through Castle Town she will get noticed due to the dark skin and red hear. In addition, Hyrule Town is a predominent Hylian stronghold. The game may have a heavy theme around the Gerudo, but placing them nilly willy around in Castle Town just defeats the purpose of the Gerudo being exiled.
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on November 03, 2012, 03:00:28 am
Why can't she have an agreement with the people? I mean, (and please don't hate me for saying this. I'm NOT racist. Just giving an example of how the mechanic of the game seems to me), for example, you see a black guy asking for a job. If he applies well, you won't say no, will you?
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: Max. on November 03, 2012, 04:16:10 am
It's not that, Blaze, it's the fact that having Gerudo in the city conflicts with other parts of the story. It's not conflicting with the characters' views, it's putting holes in the plot.
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on November 03, 2012, 12:26:42 pm
Okay, I'll see where can I put her.
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on November 07, 2012, 01:06:00 am
Piedra
Piedra is a goron that was recruited by Jack two years before his gang was disbanded. He's a goron carrying a blue coat and a red bandanda with a skull in its right. He may look strong, angry, and always ready to fight, but the truth that he's really calmed, and wants to have a nice and relaxed life. He speaks aggresively so Jack doesn't believe that he's not tough

Sometime ago, when Jack was passing by the Goron Mountains, a rock slide happened. Luckily, Piedra was close and was able to save him. Since they became good friends after that, Piedra helped very much Jack on his journey. Though to his tough-looking, and his aggresive attitude, it makes contrast with Guillermo's calmed and relaxed attitude, and they're often fighting. The only one that truly knows Piedra is Catherine.
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on November 08, 2012, 12:50:40 am
Looks like nobody noticed my new guy for the gang  :(. Just a little update for Piedra, now.

He's found in Goron Mountains. You can find it before and after completing the Earth Temple. He'll point in Link's map where the Earth Temple is located.

Now, I'm still needing one more (maybe a deku, don't know). If you talk to any of the guys before you've talked with Jack, they'll tell you anything. If you have talked with him, Jack will hand you the Pirate Hat. What's the pirate hat? It's the same hat used during all the game, but this has a little skull on its right (just as Piedra's bandana). Each of the guys of the gang have the little skull located in different parts of their clothes:

Jack: in his hat
Guillermo: in his right boot, at the back
Catherine: in her white vest
Piedra: in the right part of his bandana.
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: Max. on November 08, 2012, 08:45:53 pm
Haha, I honestly can't imagine a Deku Pirate. They're such silly people :p

Anyway, I noticed this submission, I just didn't have the time / anything directly to comment on. There was less than 12 hours between posting Piedra and complaining that nobody responded to him, please be more patient, we've all got real life stuff to deal with. Except maybe Steve. Don't know what he does with his time :p

One thing I can say, though about this:
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If you talk to any of the guys before you've talked with Jack, they'll tell you anything. If you have talked with him, Jack will hand you the Pirate Hat.

They'll tell you anything? I feel like that's a type because what do you mean? Also, what do you mean by the second sentence, under what circumstances do you receive the pirate hat? Also, you realize that with the resolution of our graphics, a skull and crossbones will be impossible to sprite on Link's hat, and honestly probably most of the locations you refer to, at least in any detail.
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on November 08, 2012, 10:06:15 pm
Haha, I honestly can't imagine a Deku Pirate. They're such silly people :p

Anyway, I noticed this submission, I just didn't have the time / anything directly to comment on. There was less than 12 hours between posting Piedra and complaining that nobody responded to him, please be more patient, we've all got real life stuff to deal with. Except maybe Steve. Don't know what he does with his time :p

One thing I can say, though about this:
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If you talk to any of the guys before you've talked with Jack, they'll tell you anything. If you have talked with him, Jack will hand you the Pirate Hat.

They'll tell you anything? I feel like that's a type because what do you mean? Also, what do you mean by the second sentence, under what circumstances do you receive the pirate hat? Also, you realize that with the resolution of our graphics, a skull and crossbones will be impossible to sprite on Link's hat, and honestly probably most of the locations you refer to, at least in any detail.

Haha, I know the skull wouldn't be seen. It's vaguely seen on the other guys clothes. Jack will tell Link: "I like you kid. I'll present you with the mark of my people: the pirate mark... Just that I don't have anymore, sorry kiddo". And well, then you can go and talk to the other ones to make the sidequest begin.

With anything I mean something. Something vaguely related to Jack and their gang. Something like: "years ago I used to be a thief like you... I still wonder where could he be". Or something like that.

And sorry for complaining. I tend to be very hasty   XD.
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on November 16, 2012, 01:01:50 am
What about the final member being another Hylian, like Jack? Something like a rivality between them, and a friendly bond in which they formed the gang.
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: BlazeBigBang on December 20, 2012, 12:28:55 am
I guess I'll leave it on those four guys. I have no idea who could be the fifth. Also, any more comments to fix, or something?
Title: Re: [Revise] Jack and his crew
Post by: MG-Zero on December 20, 2012, 01:34:44 am
I think a 5th would be starting to overflow this.  4 is plenty for their purpose.

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