not bad, your latest song is pretty good
simple and consistent.. but effect-less!
since you are a beginner you should try adding a piano with only a few low notes that plays the "important" notes for each basetone (for example)
or send me the .flp or exported .zip (from FL) and ill show you how (but tell me if you have either z3ta+, Sytrus, Morphine, Toxic or orchestral)
btw im sure you're trying to read on how to make certain sounds, effects and generally how to
i strongly advice you to only learn how to make what YOU want to make, and learn from what others make not so you make the same !@#$%, but so you can improve your own songmaking
i never listen to other peoples work, ever (i used to), but im doing well good on my own..
the hard part used to be when i couldnt make the sound i wanted to
or an effect etc.
sound theory is more important than you think, but that comes with time
(i never read on it, i just aha'd all the way there)