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Need Help With Writing :(
« on: May 25, 2009, 03:51:44 am »
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Prompt: Choose a major work you have studied in detail and analyze the theme and explain how the historical context (Political, Social, Philosophical, Religious, Ethical, etc...) influences the work, paying particular attention to theme.

What I wrote so far:
In the novel The Great Gatsby, by F. Scott Fitzgerald, the theme of corruption of the American dream is influenced by the social historical context of the 1920’s. In the book, the American dream is sought out by Gatsby, a wealthy man with high status from his numerous extravagant parties. Fitzgerald portrays the 1920’s as a decade of corroded social values emphasizing on greed, jealousy, status and empty pursuits of happiness.

I am on extreme writer's block. This is my English final. I have to write a 2 paged essay, literally memorize it, and rewrite it in class on Tuesday. I have NO idea what else to put in the intro (above). Any tips?

I am in dire need of help D:
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Re: Need Help With Writing :(
« Reply #1 on: May 25, 2009, 04:14:19 am »
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Without reading the book it is hard for me to suggest anything other than looking at sparknotes.com to see if you can get some insight you might have missed:

http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/gatsby/

It'd be easier to talk about socialism in The Time Machine by H.G. Wells, but meh.

Edit: lol, well it seems that you might already have looked at that because some of your sentence structure is eerily similar to what is found there.
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Re: Need Help With Writing :(
« Reply #2 on: May 25, 2009, 11:57:35 am »
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Having read the book and more of Fitzgerald's work (he's kind of a one trick pony), I can tell you certain scenes to focus on:

1. Think about the eye on the billboard. Essentially, it's a symbol of God, just watching, never doing anything about all that is unfolding.

2. Remember the scene where Daisy cries when she's digging through Gatsby's closet and says "I've...I've just never seen so many beautiful shirts before." It's basically the summation of her character, which in itself is a microcosm of the novel's themes.

3. Discuss the green light in the harbor that Gatsby is always staring at. It could mean several things: Daisy, the American Dream, purpose. Also try to draw a comparison between Daisy and the American Dream, as they are both fleeting ideas for Gatsby rather than a concrete object of desire.
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well i dont have that system and it is very hard to care about everything when you are single

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Re: Need Help With Writing :(
« Reply #3 on: May 25, 2009, 01:16:53 pm »
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Also for structure, try this outline.

A - ANSWER THE PROMPT

P - PROVIDE PROOF

E - I forget what E stands for.

Anyway, be sure to use quotes and proof from the novel; it will lengthen your essay by maybe half a page to a full page.
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Re: Need Help With Writing :(
« Reply #4 on: May 25, 2009, 08:37:22 pm »
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Having read the book and more of Fitzgerald's work (he's kind of a one trick pony), I can tell you certain scenes to focus on:

1. Think about the eye on the billboard. Essentially, it's a symbol of God, just watching, never doing anything about all that is unfolding.

2. Remember the scene where Daisy cries when she's digging through Gatsby's closet and says "I've...I've just never seen so many beautiful shirts before." It's basically the summation of her character, which in itself is a microcosm of the novel's themes.

3. Discuss the green light in the harbor that Gatsby is always staring at. It could mean several things: Daisy, the American Dream, purpose. Also try to draw a comparison between Daisy and the American Dream, as they are both fleeting ideas for Gatsby rather than a concrete object of desire.


I am going to use the green light as a symbol of the American dream. I just don't know how to lengthen the intro...

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Edit: lol, well it seems that you might already have looked at that because some of your sentence structure is eerily similar to what is found there

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In the novel The Great Gatsby, by F. Scott Fitzgerald, the theme of corruption of the American dream is influenced by the social historical context of the 1920’s. In the book, the American dream is sought out by many characters. Some try to obtain wealth and others try to obtain pleasure. The parties that Gatsby throws are prime examples of the social life during the 1920’s. Fitzgerald portrays the 1920’s as a decade of corroded social values emphasizing on greed, jealousy, status and empty pursuits of happiness.

Wilson’s wife, Myrtle, seeks pleasure and material items. Her secret affair with Tom, a wealthy man, shows her desire for material items and pleasure. There is no real love between them; it is just an empty pursuit of happiness. As Tom, Myrtle, and Nick go to New York, Myrtle’s materialistic urges are shown. “’I want to get one of those dogs,’ she said earnestly. ‘I want to get one for the apartment. They’re nice to have—a dog.’” (Fitzgerald 27). Myrtle’s earnest feeling towards obtaining a dog shows that she puts forth sincere effort to obtain material items. In this case, part of her American dream is fulfilled. She now has material items through Tom. Socially, she is praised for having material items. “’I like your dress,’ remarked Mrs. McKee, ‘I think it’s adorable.’” (Fitzgerald 31). Myrtle’s desire for material items is influenced by the social praise she obtains. Since she has a nice dress and a dog, she is instantly more popular. If she did not have these items, she would be like her husband, Wilson. Wilson does not have the same urges like Myrtle, and he is rarely socially active because of that. The corruption of Myrtle’s American dream provides short success in her life, but it is an empty pursuit of happiness that circles around materialism and pleasure.


That's where I am right now, thoughts?
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Re: Need Help With Writing :(
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Finished Essay:

In the novel The Great Gatsby, by F. Scott Fitzgerald, the theme of corruption of the American dream is influenced by the social historical context of the 1920’s. In the book, the American dream is sought out by many characters. Some try to obtain wealth and others try to obtain pleasure. The parties that Gatsby throws are prime examples of the social life during the 1920’s. Fitzgerald portrays the 1920’s as a decade of corroded social values emphasizing on materialism and empty pursuits of happiness.

Wilson’s wife, Myrtle, seeks pleasure and material items. Her secret affair with Tom, a wealthy man, shows her desire for material items and pleasure. There is no real love between them; it is just an empty pursuit of happiness. As Tom, Myrtle, and Nick go to New York, Myrtle’s materialistic urges are shown. “’I want to get one of those dogs,’ she said earnestly. ‘I want to get one for the apartment. They’re nice to have—a dog.’” (Fitzgerald 27). Myrtle’s earnest feeling towards obtaining a dog shows that she puts forth sincere effort to obtain material items. In this case, part of her American dream is fulfilled. She now has material items through Tom. Socially, she is praised for having material items. “’I like your dress,’ remarked Mrs. McKee, ‘I think it’s adorable.’” (Fitzgerald 31). Myrtle’s desire for material items is influenced by the social praise she obtains. Since she has a nice dress and a dog, she is instantly more popular. If she did not have these items, she would be like her husband, Wilson. Wilson does not have the same urges like Myrtle, and he is rarely socially active because of that. The corruption of Myrtle’s American dream provides short success in her life, but it is an empty pursuit of happiness that circles around materialism and pleasure.

Gatsby’s long lost love, Daisy, serves as a source of corruption for his American dream. Gatsby’s American dream is to be happy. He thinks that having everything in his life, a lover, money, and status will make him happy. To stay socially active, and high in social status, Gatsby throws numerous extravagant parties, owns a giant mansion, and makes sure that he has the right clothes. He hopes that his love, Daisy, will fall for his lifestyle and possessions. When Nick arranges Daisy to meet with Gatsby, he tries to show his lifestyle off to her. “’That huge place there?’ she cried pointing. ‘Do you like it?’ ‘I love it, …“ (Fitzgerald 90). Gatsby is trying to show Daisy that he has everything she could ever want. His American dream is corrupted by the social properties that he has observed over time. He expects Daisy to fall for him just because he is wealthy and has a high social status. This shows that Gatsby thinks you can buy abstract necessities such as love. The joy and happiness of the party attendees was bought by money, so why can’t Daisy’s? While Gatsby is taking Daisy around his mansion, Gatsby shows his clothes to Daisy in hopes that she will be lured in by their exoticness. Gatsby gets his clothes from all over the world. “’They’re such beautiful shirts,’ she sobbed, her voice muffled in the thick folds. ‘It makes me sad because I’ve never seen such—such beautiful shirts before.’” (Fitzgerald 92). This summarizes Daisy’s character. She is bought in by materialism, a characteristic of the society during the 1920’s. Gatsby’s action was influenced by the social behavior of his part attendees, a prime example of society. Now that he has coveted Daisy, all he has to do is be happy. This cannot be accomplished because Gatsby’s empty pursuit of happiness is his American dream.

The theme of corruption of the American dream is influenced by the social historical context of the 1920’s. The American dream is infested with ideas of materialism, and empty pursuits of happiness. The society of the 1920’s influences these dreams by providing a base of thought. Gatsby, among others, bases his American dream off of society. Fitzgerald provides us with a striking connection between the society and American dreams, thus influencing the work as a whole.

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