Not bad, I managed to beat the Stalfos with only Zelda dying. It seems kind of odd that Link is being crowned as King when the old King is still alive though. Eh, who knows what Hyrulian politics are like though.
For the images in your first post where you put a drawing of Link in them, it's best to use a multiply blend mode for that so you don't get the white around it. I decided to try my hand at fixing the one with the book: