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jimn346's Gallery
« on: May 28, 2011, 09:41:52 pm »
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I'm not a spriter, but would like to improve my spriting skills, so I decided to make a sprite gallery where I will occasionally post something for critique.

Oshus - Phantom Hourglass (MC Style)
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On Oshus, I'm mainly wanting to improve the staff, but please say how to fix anything else you may see. Reference

Gerudo Guard - Ocarina of Time (MC Style)

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« Last Edit: May 30, 2011, 03:10:32 am by jimn346 »
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« Reply #1 on: May 28, 2011, 11:00:37 pm »
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Pretty good
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« Reply #2 on: May 28, 2011, 11:18:36 pm »
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Nice work, but I do have a suggestion.  To me it looks like he is holding the very tip of the staff...  I am not really a spriter, but I would suggest bringing it down and showing some of it below his hand .  As it is now it almost looks like it is behind him.
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« Reply #3 on: May 28, 2011, 11:25:28 pm »
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Like this?
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« Reply #4 on: May 29, 2011, 08:34:55 am »
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wow, thats really cool!
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« Reply #5 on: May 29, 2011, 04:15:44 pm »
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Thank you! :)
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« Reply #6 on: May 30, 2011, 03:11:05 am »
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I added a Gerudo Guard.
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« Reply #7 on: May 30, 2011, 09:57:13 am »
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The coloring and details on the gerudo guard is awesome,  but she is a bit small... Her body seems smaller than MC Links, and he is a child/youth whereas the gerudo guards are grown up. Any way of making her a little taller?
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« Reply #8 on: May 30, 2011, 05:47:53 pm »
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She's an edit of Din, so the same size as her.

EDIT: Without her hair thing, she's the same height as Link, and with it she's taller.
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« Reply #9 on: June 02, 2011, 10:19:01 am »
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Oh! I maxed the size up and your right it's the same... Should she perhaps have yellow eyes though?
She looked awesomely done when I maxed up the size :)
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« Reply #10 on: June 02, 2011, 04:42:23 pm »
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Yellow eyes? The reference doesn't have yellow eyes, and I don't remember Gerudos having yellow eyes.
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« Reply #11 on: June 02, 2011, 06:21:15 pm »
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I thought they had yellow eyes in all versions...
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« Reply #12 on: June 02, 2011, 06:29:48 pm »
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It looks like different ones have different colors.
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« Reply #13 on: June 02, 2011, 06:33:52 pm »
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What reference picture did you use? I got kinda curious! ^_^ I'd love it if you did a white clad gerudo with short hair and the classical gerudo warriors as well.
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