I apologize, but according to
the Misc WIP board rules, you need a demo or decent trailer in order to post. I've moved it to the Misc. Early Production & Ideas subforum for now. Feel free to contact a mod upon meeting the requirements to get it moved back into the WIP board.
That said though, it looks like a fantastic start. The mixture of different graphical styles does look somewhat odd, but it's not too big of a deal. Keep at it.